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Behind the scenes: Day 12 Section 3
🕑 Added 2020-03-23 20:14:34 +0000 UTCEarly preview of the writing for section 3.
This section focuses on Erika & Miki.
The section begins with Brandon knocking on his sister's door, where he can hear the two girls saying stuff behind the door. Miki slowly opens the door and demands for the password for him to enter, he is confused and by asking a question. He actually says the password, which in turn makes her think he can read minds and he messes with her a bit before being let into Erika's room.
He quickly notices that the two are in pajamas, their diapers showing and they mention that it's for their slumber party. After much dialogue between them, it's decided that Brandon will join their party and with the events at hand, he strips down to his diaper and undershirt to be comfortable too. He asks what it is they do at these parties, as the two think and mention certain activities.
The player can choose one of three choices for what to do for an activity between watching a scary movie, playing twister or doing makeovers. After these events, they decide to call it a night and crawl into bed, where Brandon is able to squeeze in between the two girls. The choices that follow are determined by affection and there's some major spoilers related to these two if the choices show up for you. If you don't have high enough affection, you might not receive any choices here and is intended.
-Writer notes-
-I think this was a big moment I've wanted to write for since week 2 of the game began. There's a lot going on with a lot of information to gain out of it. This in a sense is the last event seen in the game before the reboot process, even though this section plays out much different than the one before. It still takes the idea of their slumber party event from before in mind.
-While there was a big event that took place before the reboot version during chapter 2 (aka week 2). Which was a diaper training test, that let the player choose who to group up with and help test their diapers and change them, etc. This isn't scrapped and there is ideas for where we'll see this event pop up in the future for the reboot.
-I feel like fans of Miki will get a very rewarding event from this section and fans of Erika will also receive a rewarding event, just in a different kind of tone. :P I'm excited to see how everyone enjoys these moments and there will be stuff like this for other girls coming soon enough.
-This section was going to be a bit big, but it turned out being about 4k word count including the unlocked choices. <.< day 12 is a pretty hefty sized day of content.
-I wanted to add and expand more on slumber party events, but I knew that if I cut loose completely.. The section would've been waaay more than 4k word count.
Comments
^^ It should be a fun section and a very fitting ending point for this upcoming update.
I'm really exited for the pajama Party, sounds very promising :)
Thanks ^^ it's fun to share the thoughts or what was to be or ideas planned during the writing process, etc.
Jonathan
I especially appreciate the "Writer's Notes" sections you put at the end of all of these. I think it's neat to hear the behind the scenes stories about different aspects of the game. Even the seemingly minor stuff, like having to hold back content compared to what you had in mind and save it for later on so the word count didn't balloon on you, gives us interesting insight to consider.
