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Chapter 70

🕑 Added 2021-06-29 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

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talos

Ah, okay. Usually it's done by starting a word and then ending in the middle with a dash/minus.

Teanam

I wanted Maya to interrupt her mid-sentence in that part. I'll make it more clear. Thanks.

talos

Thanks for the chapter. One correction and one suggestion: I'm good water as well → I'm good with water as well "You've noticed, huh?" Sophia looked awkward. "After I tripped," "In an extremely showy way." She had to add that. I think here the second half of the sentence is missing (after tripped) or maybe an ellipsis? It reads a bit odd. Also the "She" in the second part should be something like "Her girlfriend", because as it is now Sophia says both sentences.


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