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Chapter 83

🕑 Added 2021-07-14 12:27:49 +0000 UTC

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thkiw

Normally it would've been a scandal. But since she's powerful they don't care. They probably won't care either if she said she turned herself. Having relations with another powerful individual, and familial at that, is like a gift basket to them. Fen can always bridge the dissenters. But she should only tell the king to not cause a scene. That's my opinion anyways.

Teanam

I did see capitalization hints in the past... Maybe I should try resetting my settings... or maybe it just says something if it isn't ambiguous at all. I'll try to remember that it's King Menzor in the future (and the other upcoming titles~).

talos

Looked through it again, in the last part: <blockquote>"We have arrived. His <b>M</b>ajesty, <b>K</b>ing Menzor, is behind this door. ..."</blockquote> Here it should be capitalized because it addresses him as a person. But later you write for example: <blockquote>The king took a better look at Sophia.</blockquote> This one is correct, because no one is addressing him as king. If you wrote instead: Sophia was looked at by King Menzor. Grammarly themselves provide an overview of the capitalization rules: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/capitalization-rules/ but I think this isn't checked by their software.

Teanam

Thanks! a/e and th/h happen all the time to me because the handwriting recognition on my iPad has its problems with that, and I got kinda numb to it and overlook it a lot of times... Still weird how Grammarly doesn't care at all about those things... What about King/king? I was actually wondering whether that has to be capitalized or not the entire time.

talos

Typos: anyone steels me → anyone steals me Your majesty, his is lady Sophia, together with lady Maya on the left. → Your Majesty, this is Lady Sophia, together with Lady Maya on the left. Capitalization rules are pretty complicated in English, in this case the words Majesty/Lady are used as a form of address and thus capitalized. (also typo his/this, in case you missed it) Suggestions: not to mention having shared it with Maya → not to mention sharing it with Maya


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