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Chapter 98

🕑 Added 2021-08-13 05:33:52 +0000 UTC

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Teanam

Yeah, compared to irl, I would say Maya was actually holding back quite a bit. I kinda wanted to make Sophia seem to enjoy being popular but putting her foot down once she notices Maya actually suffers. The cat has to do something about her jealousy, too, but Sophia closing the door was more important at this point. I obviously already knew what happens when I asked about Anna/Maya. My goal there was to make sure that I don't make anyone hate either of them. Yep, flirty yes, harem nope.

epoeck

I loved the way you gave this whole situation closure. If this kind of situation happened irl that is the kind of attitude I would expect of my partner from the beginning, Sophia just came from being a fluffy character to an actual human like one in my eyes. I don't think you should change anything in the older chapters, it actually builds up very well to this and also soothes my heart that there's no harem coming hahaha

thkiw

it's okay. not a suggestion. just a joke.

Black Unicorn

I like that, I have nothing against harem stories if they are well done, but so many are just not.

Black Unicorn

Nice and I don't think you need to change anything. Also there are a few mistakes but not to bad just go over it again and I'm sure you'll find them, or someone else can point them out. I will say most of them are words you could/should add to make things flow better.

Teanam

Sorry, I like listening to suggestions and try to add them where they fit, but there won’t ever be a harem tag. That was the first decision I made when I started planning the story, long before the first chapter.

thkiw

They should learn to share. Sharing is the basis upon which huma... beastkin society is built upon. It is a very important virtue. Sharing means you care for and love the other person. (Plus, there's still time for that harem tag)


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