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Chapter 101

🕑 Added 2021-08-17 10:15:44 +0000 UTC

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Teanam

If anything, I'm exploring ideas to get the humans out of the story without it being too stupid... Maybe the group finding some outcast (being driven away because they -aren't- stupid) and letting them handle the whole thing semi-offscreen. As for the magic system... Yeah, I'm currently working on a full arc to address that part...

thkiw

to comment on chapter 100? eh. she didn't do something truly awful. evil protagonists have their own charms as well. they're hard to make and make them 'likeable', somewhat, so it sort of draws you in. I've read about this one guy, and it had featured rape in it, twice too. what's the name.... "god of slaughter". yeah. sounds disgusting right? but between a thousand chapters of murder it is kinda hypocritical not to expect that. anyways, his level of cunningness and brutality was so up there that it was making it interesting. but still, that's also why I stopped reading. as for sopiah... if you compare her to leylin or what's that dude's name, or even the demonic sword guy. yeah, a joke. she didn't even kill a sentient. ever. facing an army, she just gave them a wake up call, and also with just one quick spell - an aura. so there was no intended cruelty as well. meaning she really beat herself up for nothing. that's what I think about her 'actions'. hmmm. the humans don't have much depth to them. the magic system doesn't either. maybe author should explore that once sopiah decides to explore other worlds with canir's help. anyways, I think those are the main 'problems' honestly. just the lack of depth. but they're meant to be shallow and stupid, kind of like cartoonish villains. so np. making them more when they're already like that might ruin it though.

Black Unicorn

I liked this one a lot I don't think I even saw any misspelled words or anything. Thou my spelling sucks so... Also the last chapter was fine, even if it was a little overdone at times, it was still a great chapter.


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