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Chapter 329

🕑 Added 2022-10-14 05:57:49 +0000 UTC

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Teanam

No. he was up to something interesting, though~

Virnor

Did you write a canir POV chapter or part of it?

Anderz Draconian

Yeah, if they were popping in and out with ANY frequency at all, I'd look for a way to keep the apartment and turn a rug or something into their portal. Maybe even look for a cheaper one since they are only using for a room to warp to, and not really living in it.

Teanam

A stone in a park might be a little too conspicuous when using it, especially when activating it from the other side when you can't check if anyone's near.

Black Unicorn

Umm they can in a way teleport back and forth anytime they wish, just leave a large stone at a park near her mom's house as a portal anchor and have Sophia close it on the other side (she already did it once) and you're done. then she can open it whenever ether of them want to see mom again, could even hand wave it as why there's internet and cellphone connection near her non linked portals.

Teanam

Yeah, Sophia likes to go for the most obvious thing. No matter how much more complicated it's actually going to make it afterward. Still, let's be honest, it wouldn't have mattered. Steph meeting them and wanting to go with them was clear the moment Sophia and Maya arrived in the "old" world.

Anderz Draconian

I would complain it doesn't seem like the most well thought out plan... creating a portal, and therefore giving Steph the impression that "we can teleport back and forth any time" if not properly explained... But it is Sophia. "well thought out plans" aren't exactly her forte...

Teanam

Sophia still wasn't/isn't entirely convinced that taking Steph with them is a good idea. Her turning back into a tiger would've made Steph just even more determined.

Anderz Draconian

Small insignificant typo: they sat on the sofar... Should be sofa. Anyway, more importantly, why was portals the go to proof of magic instead of oh I dunno "wanna watch me grow a set of cat ears and a tail while my hair changes color and my pupils turn into vertical slits instead of dots?" Or would that have prompted Steph to instinctively grab the tail to confirm it's real and spark a fight with Maya?

Teanam

One thing after anohter~

Deltanz

I can’t wait to see the reaction to that and canir’s reaction to everything.

ImaginarySmasher

Steph is amazing however Sophia needs to tell or show her the tiger girl form.


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