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Chapter 332

🕑 Added 2022-10-20 05:47:18 +0000 UTC

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Mistress Araenidae

I'd look at other books and see how other authors end chapters as inspiration. I've done that for tips on dialogue tags, hooks, descriptions, etc. Mimicry is the best learning tool, after all.

Deltanz

I figured it might already be covered in later chapters but I was also like better check cause you never know. Can’t wait till tonight’s chapter.

Teanam

Not a plot hole, just not fully explained yet~ A little hint: Chloe, Maya, and obviously Sophia are the only ones who can understand her for a reason.

Deltanz

Just thought of a plot hole with this chapter and one people might ask when posted elsewhere: how is steph understanding Chloe right now since the language is different and one could say the same for when maya was in Sophia’s old world aside from she already partially knows it’s language anyways but figured I’d ask/bring it up now.

Deltanz

Makes perfect sense to me and I agree with what they both commented about how she learned it instead of all at once. But it lends credit to my thoughts in a previous chapter about who might have brought her over, imo most likely the beast goddess, still don’t remember name but I’m satisfied, for now, with what we got

Teanam

"At least we know more on how Chloe came to the world but it's interesting on how she got her memories." Yeah, I wanted to make this a little bit different than usual. I think, this way, her past life didn't have that much impact on her character as she didn't have a headstart with her memories.

Teanam

I need to come up with more creative chapter endings xD

Ultrabenosaurus

Ah, we're back to ending every chapter with "deciding to take a break" from 5 minutes of conversation.

Black Unicorn

Who did you bring here? You need to change this to something like who brought you here? Also, I so see Steph being an arctic fox, like Chloe.

Deltanz

Still can't wait to see how Steph handles Sophia/Maya's other side. One thing I forgot to mention last chapter and decided to wait till this one is how Steph will react to the wolves and their reaction to Steph. At least we know more on how Chloe came to the world but it's interesting on how she got her memories. All I got to comment on for now but I'll probly find other things later.


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