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Chapter 378

🕑 Added 2023-01-26 06:43:55 +0000 UTC

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Virnor

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Teanam

Yes and no...? Chloe accepting her to "stick around" on the spot and feeling the want to get closer to her, definitely. It's perfectly in line with her character. Accepting 'more' in their relationship right there, no.

Eleeyah

So, Chloe basically accepted Mira because she felt that that was the only acceptable choice no matter what? I'm glad about that chapter you mentioned, it sounds really interesting.

Teanam

Mrmm... I feel like she wasn't at that point yet when accepting Mira here. It all was quite overwhelming after all. Less thinking and more emotions. I'm currently brainstorming a chapter with *just* the two of them to catch up and talk about a lot of things. This might be a good place to add all those things.

Eleeyah

I can absolutely see that Chloe would (quickly) accept Mira into her life. It's just that I think she would need to go through a process of making decisions, figuring out what she wants, etc. And those things are things that I think we readers need to be privy to, to make it feel more natural, more, I don't know, alive? To that end, I think it would be good to add a paragraph about what Chloe's thinking, and why she makes the decision to accept Mira, just before this line: || "…" She went silent again, and instead of answering, Chloe wrapped her arms around Mira and tightly hugged her. || That paragraph should probably also talk about how the things she just learned affect her view of Mira and Feyfey.

Teanam

Well, Chloe has accepted Mira in her life, which I think does fit her character. She has yet to accept Mira as what she *is*, though. The overseer does still have some work to do. Fey does, too. She also lost a lot of points in Chloe's book.

Eleeyah

Hmm, so Chloe is obviously a good girl and I can see her put aside any misgivings for the sake of harmony - at least for the moment. But this feels a little TOO rushed. I think it would be good if we got to read through her thought process here, and her decision? What's she thinking, how does she want to deal with this rather huge change going forward? Without that kind of info, this feels a little, shallow, I guess?

Teanam

Kinda, I guess? She has one massive fluffy tail like Chloe, though. And no patterns like that on her face, and also more red sprinkles along her back.

Aster Vulpes

Soo kinda like some of my pins https://imgur.com/yhsLCVK (yes, if I have not given enough clues, I love foxes)

Teanam

Kinda interesting how a chapter where I didn't even try is one that's taken so emotional / gets this many "aws"

Aster Vulpes

Okay, Taenam? Why did you have to make me cry first thing in the morning? I mean I'm not complaining but still >.>

Deltanz

fair enough. Least we have some idea for now and makes sense to me.

Teanam

Illustration of Fey might take a (good) while. I mean, look how long it took how long it took until we got a propper illustration of Fenny xD Animal art is always quite hard to get. For now, when thinking about Fey, I always had that illustration in mind: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/76038902 Only without the "Japanese" bits (like the pattern on her head and the bell thingy), and more red bits on her fur. Like Mira's, just in red.

Deltanz

I’m not surprised that fey said more than she meant to after all the surprising information drop she’d had but on the brighter side glad to see Chloe finally has the answers she seeked and will be able to get to spend time with both moms. Which who knows where that might lead with Mira being in the picture now. Can’t wait to see a photo of fey

Martynas Samsonas

The whole chapter is just a straight dose of aws and wholesome, love it.

Nykuro

Wholesome Just... Wholesome Thank you for the chapter

Vesperal

AWS! ❤️❤️🥹❤️❤️

ImaginarySmasher

Wow what a chapter to wake up to and read first thing in the morning.


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