Teanam
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Final help with the prologue illustration
🕑 Added 2023-06-04 11:23:10 +0000 UTCI know I spammed a lot regarding this illustration, but let me do it one more time!
Well, and then the final version later on, of course!
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The illustration is quite important to me because it's the prologue for the sequel and will be seen by everyone who will ever take a look at the story!
Click me for full resolution!!!
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The other variants are not quite done yet!
Does anyone see anything that should be edited in any way or shape?
In my eyes, it's pretty much perfect already, but the sailing boats left of Aura need to go (there's only the group there, after all). Maybe a small island on the horizon instead. Then the shadows under Chloe's breast have a weird yellow-ish tint (around her bikini bottom, too)
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If there could be anything else, please let me know!
Also, it needs to be quick because the artist wants my suggestions in a few hours!!!
Comments
Teanam
I mean, it's very much my own fault, too xD I often have their tails drawn as long as I need them in the scene to do something cute~ The gap between Ari and Anna also makes the tail seem a little shorter because there's less wrapped around Anna's leg. Anyway, this is (now) the "canon" reference for everyone's sizes/proportions~
Nykuro
Oooh my bad then.
Teanam
Somehow, it's more of the opposite xD Sometimes, it's drawn longer than it's supposed to be~ Ari's tail is a bit shorter than Maya/Sophia/Ari, but much fluffier to make up for it. The tails of those 3 are a little longer than their legs, while Ari's supposed to be 2/3-3/4 of her legs.
Nykuro
In my opinion, Aris's tail seems shorter and stiffer than usual if I reference it to other pictures of her.
S_Mawa
Maybe reduce the shade on Sophia, she’s the MC but stands out the least your eyes are drawn to the rest automatically even though she’s closer than the rest.
Martynas Samsonas
Excluding the boats that the first thing that comes to mind are what are sailing boats doing in miras domain? I don't see anything wrong with it
