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Chapter 140

🕑 Added 2024-09-05 17:47:00 +0000 UTC

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Nicke H

unless she gets to know the truth I dont see any other options. but I agree its a bit cheap. lol yeah trap big success

Teanam

The trap worked~  Yeah, it will probably end up being something like that, though it feels pretty cheap.

Nicke H

had to look for her name, and now I cant stop reading it all over again .... (say she was incognito lol)

Teanam

I like the idea of someone "normal" explaining Sophia's domain, and I *do* want people in there eventually, but Sophia not knowing about them would be kinda impossible. Menzor chapter sounds like nothing but pain and headaches, though xDD (For him, I mean)

Teanam

That's the plan~  (once I figure out how to explain -Sophia- to her xD)

Nicke H

so will Chiyo appear again if they are visiting Mayas hometown ?

Bast

Okay, somehow my comment wasn't sent. I think it's possible. Canir, Mira, or Blu are all enough to cause a mess that Sophia has to fix elsewhere, unable to react to happenings in her domain. At least for a few minutes, which would be enough for untainted first impressions. Another POV I would love is Mentor or maybe the mayor from a few chapters back. I think those would be interesting. Maybe that could show how the portals are changing the city, or something. These are all ideas, of course, and I'm not the one writing the story :)

Teanam

That would be fun, but Sophia said multiple times now that she knows what is going on in her domain at all times and whenever someone uses a portal linked to it, as well as saying that only people she allows to can enter it. It might be canonically too secure for such accidents. The only way would be Sophia messing up when putting something into her domain, which is... not impossible xD

Bast

Thanks for the chapter! At some point I would be really interested in an "interlude" chapter where some random dude (read as cute girl) stumbles into Sophia's domain by accident. I know she controls the portals, but there are plenty of options of someone messing with that. Edit: Like, really an accident. No talk with Sophia, just in there with no warning whatsoever


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