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Chapter 290: Have Violent Ends

🕑 Added 2022-12-22 14:52:36 +0000 UTC

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UncrownedKing

next chapter definitely made it a much easier pill to swallow. as long as there's a reason for a character to makes a very irrational decision and they actually acknowledge they did as much, I can look past it. I may not necessarily agree with how it was handled, but at least it wasn't played off as if it was the only or even best way. though I do still think it's weird how all of them are so uncompromising in everything they do

athass_prkr

I guess you have a point. It's better explained in the next chapter, and there's a lot to it. But this was always the plan with Rose. I tend to go to extremes with the Potters because of how I presented them at the start of the story, where I really didn't know where I was going and I had to keep them persistent. I still think I could've done this better, and made it more compelling, but I wrote this while finishing a dissertation for school. I was so burned out and I didn't really write my best.

UncrownedKing

I just don't get why you go to the extremes every time the potters are involved. Like would it not have made much more sense for Jasmine to bind Rose's magic and lock her up for a few days so she could calm down and they sort things out? It's like every time they are involved she purposefully acts in a way that makes her seem guilty of something. Not to mention taking words said in anger and grief so seriously. it's like if your child said they hated you because you took their game away and you decide to disown them for that.

Ouraga_n

thanks for the chapter. because of you I slept badly, I read the chapter before sleeping and I came across chapter 289 and the cliffhanger, which ran through my head at night.

Delltree100

Wonderful chapter author sama.

athass_prkr

I just found no way to fit her in the story. From the moment I introduced the characters, I planned on killing off Nathan and making a falling out with Rose. There's a reason for all of this. I didn't just kill her off for fun, don't worry.

athass_prkr

There's a reason I'm doing this. I don't want to spoil anything, but I do have a rough outline of the entire story from start to finish from the moment I started and this was always the plan.

Robert Thompson

I love this story but it feels like youre always making jasmines life harder. I wish you could give her a W every once in awhile. No matter what happens it seems like she loses everything she cares about

Dankermaler

I really liked rose how come you did that


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