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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 18: Silence in the Library

🕑 Added 2023-02-26 17:11:04 +0000 UTC

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Ouki's Lips

I like it. But maybe since the MC of this fic is a guy, try to butch up the dialogue a bit? Guys don't call other guys "dear".. unless they're hitting on them, maybe, but I didn't get the impression that this MC swings that way

athass_prkr

I can understand your frustration, but Canon never really explained how magic worked and that's my take on it. Honestly, I made it this way because I'm going to elaborate on it later. And I did take heavy inspiration from the Nasuverse with how it worked (But I'm still doing it differently than that). As for the Azkaban stuff, you have to remember that this isn't canon. Dementors will be fundamentally different from any other magical creature (It will be explained in more detail later) and the Death Eaters haven't escaped yet. Maybe they never will, or maybe there's another reason how they would escape. As long as I haven't written about it, it's not part of the story. Look, I will elaborate more on Azkaban when it's relevant to the story, and if there is an escape then the means to it will be explained, but you need to treat this as something that's different than canon.

Jon

i enjoy the fic but greatly dislike your magic veins theory, also your azkaban theory doesnt play out as thered be no reason magic creatures would live in said place and no way for death eaters to have escaped unless they used muggle means like bombs

Delltree100

i need moar.

Gummyking2

Ok, I’m hooked!


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