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Your Suggestions
🕑 Added 2022-05-28 11:20:54 +0000 UTCHey guys, someone reminded me that I'm supposed to use this platform to have a better interaction with you. So, well, here I am, I guess.
Anyway, with my finals finished, I have a little bit of free time, so I wanted to address a couple of stuff.
First thing first, I will start uploading more chapters per week. The usual three chapters per week will remain the same, but if I'm ever bored or free, I'll upload an extra chapter that day. I'll keep this up until I get an internship or something similar.
Second, I need a beta. I have been making a lot of mistakes (mostly typing ones) and I think I need someone to check my work as I upload it. If you're interested either PM me or comment on this post.
Finally, I know the story has been a bit stale for a few chapters. Yeah, I got a little bored with the X-men, so I'm planning to end the arc with a bit of a bang and by introducing the main antagonist of the story and I'm a little excited about what will happen after that. I wanted to see if any one of you has any suggestions or ideas that you want to see (If you actually send one in, there's no guarantee that I'll do it, but if you want, if I find it interesting and if it fits the story, I'll probably add it in). So, comment your suggestions, if you're interested in seeing something in particular.
Thank you for your support,
A.
Comments
grechri
I have no idea if you want to go there, but maybe you could get the Inhumans in the story. At least as a very short story. I would like the version of Agents of Shield. I’m not sure but maybe Jasmine can start with them and later branch out into more alien elements. If you watched the show you could also use Hive, who was an ancient Inhuman that was somehow Hydra’s god and could control all Inhumans and humans in general. Another storyarc could be the fantastic four to start of space stuff. I would also love the interactions between Jasmine and Reed Richards. Especially if he were to already experiment with multiverses portals and Jasmine being terrified of the lack of any safety measures and the utter lack of understanding of what realms are out there.
Vortex
Maybe a pov from hestia?
Vyktor
Suggestion : Keep up the good work! 👍😋 May be interesting to have a discussion between Magneto, Xavier and Jasmine in a restaurant to remember the good (or bad) time and some information about what she did to them in Cuba? 🤔 I'll love to be a beta reader, but I'm not an English language native and I'll miss many errors 😔
Vortex
What ever makes more sense to you for the story
athass_prkr
I planned on making in 2-3 arcs or so, there's supposed be this thing with Wanda, but I can make it earlier, just after the X-men arc.
Vortex
Probably see how the mc’s sister is?
