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Chapter 129: Dealing

🕑 Added 2022-06-03 15:37:24 +0000 UTC

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Ok, I'm only saying this because it takes away from this amazing story you are writing, but try to add breaks in between lines when a character is speaking with emotion, if there are no breaks or signals, how do you expect to convey emotion.

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Jasmine’s position is completely fair. If she solved everyone’s problems all the time, they’d just become totally dependent on her.

Vyktor

I agree with Jasmine, she's doing the same job as the Sorcerer Supreme, protect the Earth from the "deviations" (natural laws breaking, outer entities invasion,...) but what humans do, she don't act (as long as it don't destroy the future, as the potential WW3 with the Cuban Missiles Scandal) 🤔

grechri

I like Jasmine’s attitude. You can see the effect her life had on her here.


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