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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 164: Dark Wings

🕑 Added 2023-11-11 13:35:08 +0000 UTC

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Doubledoor

Interesting stuff, very teenage much drama but that's definitely necessary for there to be any sort of genuine friendship in the long run. I look forward to what you do with the 2 remaining (?) Marauders after all is said and done. Tftc!

athass_prkr

He's not indulging them, but he could have reacted better. He has been acting condescendingly towards them for years. It was a subconscious thing, and they didn't like it. This was them essentially snapping back at him, wanting to be treated like equals. They were just very aggressive about it. Fights are bound to happen between hormonal teenagers, and I decided to use this one to forge back the friendship they had in their first year, which I ignored in favour of plot-driven stuff. It's a very temporary thing, just a fight that will be resolved in a couple of days, but the team dynamics will change slightly.

J

Dunno why he's indulging their fragile egos. He should just show them how weak they are.

athass_prkr

As always, if you have any comments or suggestions let me know. I really appreciate your feedback.


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