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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 171: Of Dystopian Declarations

🕑 Added 2023-11-23 10:50:15 +0000 UTC

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CaptainYumYum12

I think that if Albus can't force Harry to enter because of parents kicking up a fuss. He would manipulate the goblet to force Harry into it anyway. Or for this mini goblet of fire he has planned, ensure the final task would involve Harry's friends, forcing him to enter.

Everbond

The chapter is decent albeit a little rushed on events. Realistically I would have probably went with that potter is not directly informed from him taking a meal to translate everything. Whatever you're planning on doing if harry comes out a winner have him and his friends denounce by oath ,or similar,that they will not be participating in the actual tournament.

A.

its pretty good but HP should start making some progress to counter A.D. (not magically as its probably still far away but politically or try to shift something towards him instead of him taking the brunt of it). Furthermore, how exactly will this tournament be managed logistically if everyone has to participate? I like the idea of the new tournament deviating from the usual though. It can also be good to see the repercussions of how weak Britain had gotten in comparison to other countries when there is a larger amount of people participating rather than just one talented individual from schools.

TypistTyphon

I would love for Harry to prevent it being forced for people to enter only to get entered anyway

athass_prkr

I'll be honest, I'm not entirely sure about this chapter. I have plans for the tournament, but I'm not sure about how I introduced it... As usual, if you have any suggestions or comments, let me know.


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