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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 180: The Black Swan

🕑 Added 2023-12-09 11:48:50 +0000 UTC

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CaptainYumYum12

we need a dumpy-door chapter soon where he's just getting ripped by the public for his games being outsmarted lmao

Abe 7

Arcturus sounded like a lonely proud old man, clinging to last of his family(however distant) and do right by his sister’s memories. Excellently characterized by you. His character has of lot of underutilized potential which many fanfics don’t make use of.

TypistTyphon

Really good chapter, Arcturus reaction is good!

athass_prkr

I wanted to know your thoughts on how I handled Arcturus' response to Sirius being alive. I wanted him to sound mature since he's a war hero who already experienced heartbreak after what happened to his family. Let me know what you think, or if you have any suggestions.


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