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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 196: A Thankless Job

🕑 Added 2024-01-06 11:28:29 +0000 UTC

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Jason f

I think you should have Neville be fully possessed by his scar, and find someway for Dumbledore to be linked to Neville "going dark". Essentially while Dumbledore was focusing on harry his "light champion" would be corrupted.

CaptainYumYum12

And Dumpy door Is also getting embarrassed on camera. Since these would be filmed right?

TypistTyphon

Liked the chapter a lot thanks

Patryk Krystoforski

I have been reading this story for couple days now, its pretty good. I hope there is a chapter in stores from Arcturus pov, sone reflections of his on Potter family and Harry’s grandfather.

Patryk Krystoforski

In sone previous chapters with Dumbledore pov, he specifically considered turning harry into another dark lord. At this point its clear that riddle was turned into dark lord so Dumbledore can continue with his agenda of defanging the magical population.

Astral Aion

I liked the chapter was interesting to get a POV of moody. Not sure why Harry feels the need to keep pushing Dumbledore it’s just gonna make him more insistent he could have just forfeited without the insults

Callum Runchman

Haha. Love Harry's response to dumbledore trying to break up his friendships. Honestly it's like dumbles is trying to make him become a dark lord and force him down that path. Blaming him for neville's lapse in control on harry is a new low considering he already knows or suspects the horcrux at this point in time. Honestly I think harry or someone else needs to expose some of of his dark secrets and force him to lose more influence

athass_prkr

This was pretty hard to write. Please let me know what you think or if you have any suggestions.


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