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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 225: Gold Rush

🕑 Added 2024-02-25 13:12:42 +0000 UTC

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Przemyslaw Szczepanik

Well I would recommend brushing up on English then? "Holy shit, Harry only wanted the man to leave him alone." Very clearly refers to the past, as in: "Harry wanted Dumbles to not mess with him and leave him alone but he just didn't and hence shitstorm happened". It doesn't say anything about the current state of affairs and more importantly: what would you have Harry do exactly? Go after Dumbledore? How? Harry IS afraid. And he is right to be so. He saw that the big boys of the world are a lot more powerful than he'd previously thought. Getting revenge for the torture and attempted murder would be nice and all but it's not ideal if you can't really do anything at the moment other than make your own situation worse. What did you expect, that Harry would go all batman on the Order of the Phoenix, before he's even fully recovered? That's just stupid, and Harry is not stupid.

Amir

Did not like the chapter because it lessens the importance of previous ones. He swore vengeance for what was done to him right before he was imprisoned. I get that he is not strong enough yet to face Dumbledore, but saying that he just wants to be left alone feels like he is to afraid to even try to get payback for the torture he went through

Doubledoor

Nice to see Harry's feelings for Daphne crystalizing over time. Definitely one of the best gradual romances (I assume) I've ever read.

Sukhraj Singh

I think a bit of a filler chapter is ok. I loved Daphne's reaction to Harry suddenly making the Potter family possiblely the richest family in Magical Britain. Daphne was spot on when she said Harry would use his special abilities to get the best deal possible

DB#05

It does feel like filler but I think you need that every now and again to really make the more interesting chapters have more of an impact. Keep up the good work

James Christy

I think a bit of filler and slower chapters is fine right now, with all the time skips between tasks and massive reveals. It’s good to just slow down a little and let Harry process everything. Still loving the story, great work!

athass_prkr

Not sure about this chapter tbh. It feels a bit like a filler but things have been so hectic in the last dozen chapters that I felt there had to be something to slow things down slightly. As usual, please let me know what you think or if you have any suggestions.


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