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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 47: Reparations

🕑 Added 2023-04-15 14:18:07 +0000 UTC

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Doubledoor

A good point about how it's not really Hermione's fault, but I don't think it's about the plot. Harry probably just resents Ron and Neville for their treatment of him and wants to force Hermione to break her friendship with them for it. It would be one of the best ways for him to hurt them without losing the moral high ground.

ShadowPillow

*shakes my head at Harry* The whole "it's your fault we're not friends, Hermione" rhetoric really gets to me. Sure, he's not super social and doesn't know how to handle it right, but he's basically putting the entire impetus of their friendship breaking on Hermione's behavior, when in reality she isn't flipflopping, she just gained the courage to try to correct her mistake, and Harry's real rationale is the calculated reason of wanting to stay out of the burden and mess of the Plot. Otherwise, I don't think he would be so hesitant, whether he realizes explicitly that's the true reason and not the excuses he made. Anyway, I'm glad Hermione is being stubborn about it and decided to take "friendly acquaintances" to the max. Honestly, I tried that line once, and that's why I'm a little pissed at Harry for doing this, because I'm still pissed at myself for it. It worked out much better for him though, just because Hermione is Hermione and still young. Anyway, good chapter. Even if I disagree with a character's choice in the narrative strongly, I think your narrative is still impartially telling the story from both POV's well, so kudos to that. I'm also curious to see how the decision to tip Hermione off about Flamel might cascade HP1's timeline forward, and what Dumbledore's thoughts about Harry really are... Keep up the good work.

athass_prkr

He'll be a prodigy, but he'll be hiding a lot (Like his experimentation, his skill with the mind arts, his spell crafting, etc...) He'll essentially be a super Hermione to the general public.

Gummyking2

Is Harry going to have a reputation as a prodigy? You mentioned early that he was advanced in the teachers meeting. Is he going to keep his skills on the down low or just out in open?

Chris

I just realized with the portion of the prophecy that Voldemort knows he may actually think Harry is the prophecied child. That would mean that he may try to kill Harry. Would be funny if this causes Harry to be marked by him.


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