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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 57: Riddle Me This

🕑 Added 2023-05-01 11:29:34 +0000 UTC

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Shadowsmage

thanks for the chapter

Kronus4i

I always thought thought the first book was a test of character for Harry see what kinda person he would become. So it kinda makes sense what going on. Don’t really care much for the Lord of Light and Dark. But interesting to see that Voldamorty isn’t one. Also nice save with the hallow

Sebastian Smolarczyk

Pity the story for most part was great but in the end it will be average or blow average fan fiction. Dark and Light Lord is a stupid idea that for over 20 years is used in HP fan fictions and is still bad. I hope and hope you will not put any arch mages, light lords or dark ones in your story and all this is just Voldemort crazy talk to get harry. But if you do plz explain to me why ? Is it to make Harry Special ? To explain why someone can be op ? What for exactly? Aside of this problem the second one for me is your take on Albus, like most writers you are making him to be evil, stupid ect. Can you stop, really really stop. I will not get in to this part much put I will give you a hint, if he really wanted to control and manipulate Harry why not use magic to do it. We know it can be done and yet why this evil, so smart(and stupid at the same time person) that can predict futer not use magic to make sure that Harry and others fallow his orders to a latter, and we know it can be done without them knowing.

Carrot

The whole Dark Lord/Light Lord thing seems really dumb honestly. What's a Light Lord even supposed to be? Someone who's against indiscriminate murder? Why is that supposed to be a bad thing? I'm sort of hoping this is all some sort of delusion of Voldemort's.

Doubledoor

It's very irritating to me how much everyone blames Dumbledore for this situation when the only way he could have known about the threat Quirellmort posed to Harry would have been forced Legilimency on one of them. Obviously Quirrel would have been a dumb idea considering the Dark Lord and Harry made sure to minimize all contact with the man and stop himself from ever looking into his eyes. (Other then right after the forest, but at that point Dumbledore had no reason to dig deeper)

Gummyking2

I’m not a huge fan of this chapter, I don’t think he should’ve got AK’d. I just don’t think Voldy would give a shit about Harry.. his main focus is the stone and Neville, he might be slightly interested in Harry because of his performance and the incident in the forest, but he’s wasting time meeting with Harry (an 11 year old) to make offers instead of going after the stone in his window of opportunity. If you’re going with a voldy that has a reason to do what he does, this chapter seems out of character. Also this is too big for Harry to cover up, he’d be the second boy who lived. If you’ve read the SI In Pursuit of Magic, the mc gets magical scars/burns and changes in eye color after encountering voldy, I think something like this is more reasonable.

Chris

I don't think that is correct either. Dumbledore is a puppeteer. He tries very hard to make sure everyone is happy. Dumbledore is definitely willing to be ruthless to even his allies if necessary. However Dumbledore tries very very hard to make sure that doesn't happen. It's only when the war starts again that he is forced into this.

Fernzyyyy

Thay Peverell blood/heritage must be good shit. How else can he survive an AK.

Fernzyyyy

I meant inaction. He has all the resources at his finger tips he need only take a action. Yet he is satisfied to just sit back and only do the least

Salokin

"Apathy" isn't a word I would describe to Dumbledore in cannon or in this fanfic, tho. Not sure where you got that idea, but I've always seen Dumbles as someone who would quietly commit crimes even against his allies and subordinates if it serves a purpose. Then uses his mantra of "for the greater good" to assuage his guilt.

Fernzyyyy

Idk why I hate Dumbledore way more than Riddle, at least with Riddle he was born unable to feel love and the circumstances of his conception doomed him. With dumbles the man has faced tragedy yet his apathy is so vexing

TyrantGod

I hope this wakes the MC up finally.


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