Patrefans
athassprkr from patreon
athassprkr patreon

(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 64: The Alchemist

🕑 Added 2023-05-15 11:01:23 +0000 UTC

Comments

DraconianGreed

Albus seemed like Palpatine after killing Darth Plagueis

athass_prkr

Thank you for your support and I'm glad you like both my stories so far. Anyway, the short recaps are kinda for me and I just kinda forget about them after I'm done. It's a good way to see where I left off in my story. I'll try not to use them in Enchanting Melodies all that much, but in Magical Marvel which only has like 10 chapters left, it would be strangely asymmetric, which would be weird. Honestly, I didn't really think about people reading with TTS, so if there are any other comments that could make your experience better please let me know.

permissionBRICK

Well, i guess I should add something about this story as well. I've been following this one for a while now, and only just now discovered your other story, which was when i dove into the 700k words monster and i came back out as a patreon ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ But back to Enchanting Melodies. I feel like this story has a lot of inspiration from Hogwarts Legacy, which I kind of enjoy. I wonder how similar Harry's 'Power' is to the 'ancient magic', because there definitely seem to be differences, but the fights and combat magic in general are similar. Also while I appreciate the short recap with every new chapter for when I'm reading new ones when they come out, you might want to edit it out again when adding the next chapter, as when reading with TTS it gets really repetitive, especially when you can't skip the recap while you are driving :)

athass_prkr

Thanks for your comment. I appreciate your support. As for the 'Back to..' thing, it's not intentional. Honestly, it's something of a reflex on my part whenever I get derailed when explaining something and want to go back to the subject. I'll try to avoid using it in writing, so thanks for pointing it out.

suspicious

First time I see a convincing villain Dumbledore with a motivation that matches his goals. I'm newly subscribed and wanted to thank you for your hard work, I'm enjoying the story very much. Just wanted to add before I'll forget it, even if I don't think it happened in this chapter but you have the tendency to write "Back to.." sometimes when you transition from thoughts etc., I don't know if it's voluntarily, but for me it kind of breaks the immersion of the story sometimes. Kudos and all the best for the future.

Kronus4i

And now the will of fate has turned its wheels once more. Oh albus don’t you know prophecies make fools of all for only a seer can know it’s truth. Death has gazed and found you wanting for it is the fairest judge of all. Life is about balance and free will. Fate decreed you as a champion. But by your own willingness to forsake others for a force so Unbending. Balance must be achieved. So Death Has decreed your time is near and Fate shall make it so. For all follow Life and Death. An never ending adventure.

Shadowsmage

Thanks for the chapter

Delltree100

Wonderful chapter author sama.

athass_prkr

Spoilers ;D

athass_prkr

Spoilers ;D

athass_prkr

It's a bit more complex than that. But thing won't be explored for a while tbh

Fernzyyyy

This light and dark shit means free will isn't really a thing. I'm getting Indra and asura gives from Naruto here

TyrantGod

There can be multiple forces: Life/Death, Chaos/Order, Fate etc Will there be other characters who represent those forces (someone Harry’s age group too) It will be interesting that way instead of just the 4 way fight

Salokin

TFTC Just a prediction: Light and Dark aren't the only forces to have "champions". Given what we've seen so far I'd say Harry is the Master of Death, chosen to end Voldemort's "immortality" (as is my theory of the cannon) but in this one it appears that Dumbledore has also gotten Death angry at him.

Gilgamos

Harry combines the dark and the light??

Gilgamos

Yeah fuck albus

Gilgamos

Thanks for the chapter

JayFireblood

Fuck ablus


More Creators