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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 110: Courtly Inquisition

🕑 Added 2023-08-06 08:53:18 +0000 UTC

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OneMore

Exactly my thoughts. It's just a bunch of teenagers playing house, essentially.

Dhalmeida

It's q good interpretation of a juvenile court but I think you will have some future issues with the power play and politics after year 4 with the characters you have now... Or you make a real shadow power in Slytherin or you will have a insipid chunibyo court... And about maturity, future lord's with training and competition to define the heir, normally will be more mature... Malfoy is just the only option in his heritage so he don't need maturity just follower without a brain.

VidDav FerDeL

Same here because they're nobles so they would be thought politics and how to act correctly by their families especially those in slytherin and not to mention that 16-18 can be considered young adults

MaisiIsu

I disagree with the other comment here. I think you showed perfectly that this "court" are just made of a bunch of edgy teens with no clue, trying their best to be all grownup and badass, while instantly panicking at any problems that is higher than schoolyard level. It's a textbook example of chunibyo behavior, and it's clear that Harry is far beyond them already(which he should with his special background). Which is a breath of fresh air honestly, in comparison to all these unrealistic and cringe slytherin fics where all the 11 year olds are already political master minds, lol. In this fic the kids are actually stupid and inexperienced like they are supposed to be.

Mohamed Gx

Nice chapter! You nailed it.


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