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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 336: The Last Round

🕑 Added 2024-09-08 13:43:01 +0000 UTC

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mekistorm

is that some kind of crest?

Abe 7

Well, Harry’s “coming out of the closet” went pretty good all things considered😆. Seriously though, this chapter felt a bit rushed. Is it due to wanting to end this arc as soon as possible?

athass_prkr

That's probably it. I guess since I was planning on explaining Harry's actions in the next chapter, I sort of forgot to do it here. I'll probably = tweak the chapter a bit tomorrow if I have the time. If I don't, then I'll just do it in the next chapter. Edit: I tweaked the ending a bit to reflect Harry's behaviour. Let me know if it makes the chapter a bit better.

William

Yeah I agree with Callum, it seemed like Harry has been slowly learning how to care for other people and their feelings throughout the story, and while he hasn’t been perfect in that regard it has been improving. But this chapter and the way he delivered the plan to Harry and Sirius seems like a huge step backwards for him.

Callum Runchman

I know Harrold is a tad sociopathic with his limited emotional connections etc but this feels a little extreme to me. I mean telling harry outright like that with no emotion and then not really understanding harry and sirius' outrage is one the most extreme examples we've see so far and I was under the impression he was actually getting better. I'm curious how they will trick voldemort into a trap and am looking forward to seeing Harrold return to his home dimension. He must be not only getting extremely bored where he is but also perhaps rather concerned at what's been happening whilst he's been away

Afterdark230

It’s a little rushed, I think it needs more, it hits too fast, faster then your normal chapters. That being said the context is there just needs flushed out a bit more. Also spelling mistake, forgot a “t” in one sentence it reads no a, needs to read not a.

J

Nah, I feel this - I'd be bored as hell and itching to get out in this timeline if I was Harrold. It feels perfectly justified this forcing of the hand.

Sukhraj Singh

So canon Harry is finally going to learn that Harrold is him from an alternate universe. I have to say canon Harry is going to feel like a complete failure who has not even scrathed the surface of his true potential given all that he has learned that "Harrold" is capable of with his magic, when he see his alternate self actually defeat Voldemort he is going to feel like an underachieving, talentless idiot compared to what he could have been. At least canon Harry will have Sirius to help guide him and teach him once Voldemort and Dumbledore are both gone. I am curious if this is the last we will ever see of canon universe after Harry returns to his own universe.

Przemyslaw Szczepanik

Yyeah. I also think it was forced, and not in line with what *our Harry would do. I've honestly no idea how to better go about it but for once I agree the chapter feels totallly off.


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