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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 344: The Land Between

🕑 Added 2024-09-22 13:31:16 +0000 UTC

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Shai Grin

Love the comparison to a bacteria when Harry though Morded was Death, straight out of Supernatural series

Garri Sarkisov

Now that you mention it, this chapter did remind of Elden ring and their world of it that was created to be foreboding with riddles

Adam Daw

The only comment, and it's a bit nitpicky, is that the prophecy rhymes but the rhythm is off - too many syllables or beats in some lines (the metre is off) for the style.

Sad Rain

Amazing chapter. I can't wait to see what path Harry will create forward.

Sukhraj Singh

So Harry is a descendant of Mordred Pendragon, that is interesting. I always personally found the story of Arthur and Merlin too idealic, Arthur looks like someone who never planned out his succession and fucked up his kingdom and Merlin a manipulative sage with a godcomplex. So Harry is back in his universe at last. I am curious, how much time has passed in his universe while he was in canon verse?

Afterdark230

I figured you had something like this up your sleeve. I think it’s perfect! You gave us enough info to spark curiosity and a nagging for what is planned next!

Monzter E

The chapter did its job to be mysterious, the inclusion of mordred lend history to the conflict, the prophecy as the main question of the story that harry must answer, the new area as an aspect of the world that made me feel the scale of the conflict. However the bloodline bit, it got me confused on the importance of this new info. All in all a good chap

Gummyking2

I like it, I’m confused for sure.. but I think you’ll explain everything later. Excited to see what changed will Harry was away

athass_prkr

Was it really that bad? I was hesitant about doing this scene at all, to be honest. I was tempted to not upload it and try to make up with an extra chapter later

Monzter E

Wtf! What even is this? Well u got me thinking 🤔


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