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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 347: Fated Reunion

🕑 Added 2024-09-28 13:30:28 +0000 UTC

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Garri Sarkisov

Magical kiss

Jethro Frank

No it’s not realistic lol. I’m married and my wife alone is all I can handle, especially when she’s pregnant lol. So yeah, I think it’s just fine. I think Salient91 did it the best in his fic, but he introduced all the girls early on. Most fics that have multiple partners devolve into porn fics, which I think is not what you’re going for.

athass_prkr

Nah, I don't think the premise of multiple partners would work in this story. I just wouldn't know how to write one in a way that makes sense. As I have written him, Harry is kinda hopeless in social situations. He wouldn't know anything about having multiple partners nor would he have the motivation for it. Also, I know that it's kinda weird since this is in a magical world, but I wanted the characters in the story to be a bit realistic, in their motivations, their emotions and so on. I don't know if I pulled it off but it was my intention. And as much as half the men in the world probably wish it was, having multiple partners isn't really common or realistic. At least, I don't think it is. I'm sure there are fringe cases and whatnot. I'm not really knowledgeable about the subject and I could be wrong. Still, I'm pretty sure it wasn't a common thing in the 1990s, which is when most of this story takes place. Also, it took me over 300 chapters to build up the romance between Harry and Daphne, and someone else jumping in to join them would feel cheap, at least it would for me. Anyway, I'm sorry if I disappointed you, but Harry will only have a single girlfriend. It doesn't make any sense, at least to me, for that not to be the case. However, if you disagree and you can find a way for it to make sense, I am open to suggestions.

athass_prkr

No harem, so don't worry about that. I decided that from the start even if I don't think I explicitly said it. As for the rest, well, I wouldn't want to ruin the surprise :)

Abe 7

Oh, he is definitely gonna be in the doghouse. Even if it’s not his mistake.

Afterdark230

Very good, I know she will not let him off that easy!

gv100

It’s good 👍, idk how your idea of dimensions work but doesn’t it seem a bit optimistic that lilys connection was completely blocked by the explosion? Maybe there’s more to it though, like she had an anchoring object? I was thinking she could just use a different dimension to help against moldyshorts but I guess ‘her’ dimension that she was isolated in for a decade has the strongest connection for her? I feel like you’ve been hinting that dimensional magic is coming eventually, I’m sure theory crafting that will be fun 😃. Either way, good chapter, I enjoyed it! (Please please please don’t make this a harem fic 🥺🥺🥺🥺)

Monzter E

Its good 👍

Jethro Frank

Nice! Tftc! Honestly though, is this a single romance or are you planning on adding others? I know Fleur was pretty impressed with him.

Erick Myrthil

It's okay to make the romance more an off screen thing. Otherwise it might come off as forced or weird. Don't even get me started on authors who turn their fics into porn and lose the whole plot.


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