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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 358: The Fleeting Sunset

🕑 Added 2024-10-17 13:31:06 +0000 UTC

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Shadow Fiend

"Your task begins tomorrow in a week." Which is it? Lol Great chapter

gv100

some typos, but good chapter for sure! wonder whats up with our favorite blond 🤔

Rabbit of Caerbannog

I think Daph is using her blood to transfer the curse to herself

Afterdark230

lol

Tamen Dutta

Yup realised that too. Also if I remember right, the tree of the apple belongs to Hear.

athass_prkr

I was tempted to put Aphrodite instead. The thought did cross my mind, but, well, let's just say there's a reason I chose those five.

Tamen Dutta

The funny thing is i was about to ask you replace Hera with Apollo to make them all start with A.

athass_prkr

Spoilers :)

athass_prkr

I must have not paid attention while writing it and forgot to add one. There's Apollo, Artemis, Ares, Athena and Hera. Thanks for pointing it out :)

Tronic42

I have somehow the feeling that the legendary Kronos is in reality a future Harry jumping in time and space...

Tamen Dutta

You mentioned 5 houses but named only 4??

Afterdark230

There you go, that is a better way to wrap that chapter up. Also the padding you put in was perfect as well! Let’s see what everyone else thinks about it! And thank you for using my consideration!

athass_prkr

I changed it up a bit. What do you think?

Afterdark230

You could extend the banter back and forth between Harry and Daph and that might make the chapter longer. Your usual cliff hanger is there maybe make it so Daphne turns to Harry and says change of plans.


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