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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 361: The Slayer’s Ascent

🕑 Added 2024-10-22 13:30:39 +0000 UTC

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omiguh

Not a fan of the backstory of the school and the competitors choice of students to choose. It feels so cliche. Like in cultivation novels. Oh you thought these people were the strongest, wrong, it’s actually these people. In my opinion, adding this type of unexpected villain is just unnecessary. Other than just thinking cliche and moving on. It’s kind of like kind of hoping Harry actually leaves Europe before the seventh task. Now that would be unexpected, let’s see what dumbledore and grindelwald have plan and let Harry and friends be long gone. But the cliche route is for some reason force Harry to stay for the next task and have to get involved

Shannon Hutcherson

So is his mom dead? It seemed like she was already dead in the first half and she's in a coma in the end?

Ajani Love

This is getting exciting and its only the beginning

zain sad

I'm glad you keep writing. I just love reading the faces and even if you write a new one I will read it. I think it is a tool that is shown in many magic schools, because in the world of Harry Potter there is not only Hogwarts I'm glad you keep writing. I just love reading the faces and even if you write a new one I will read it. I think it is a tool that is shown in many magic schools, because in the world of Harry Potter there is not only Hogwarts I'm glad you keep writing. I just love reading the faces and even if you write a new one I will read it. I think it is a tool that is shown in many magic schools, because in the world of Harry Potter there is not only Hogwarts

Garri Sarkisov

I like your strangers POVs about problems and reasons behind the scenes. It helps paint the picture of the world much better then with just one POV

Tamen Dutta

Ahh gorgon incoming??🤣🤣

athass_prkr

I've had it outlined for almost 6 months now. I'm really hope you lot will like it.

MonolithV

So many many factions fighting for the apple. This gonna be a looong arc isn't it? I'm pretty excited. How long have you been planning this arc?

athass_prkr

Thank you for catching that. I just fixed it.

Based_Bass

“Perseus hoped he would never develop such a mastery over his magic one day.” Don’t think you meant to put in the “never”.

Afterdark230

Nothing wrong with introducing a new character when it will have interactions with main story line. Cannot wait to see what is in store for the task!

athass_prkr

You're right. Thank you for catching that. I just fixed it.

Tamen Dutta

Each school had a different ambition and took different classes.. Each house I guess


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