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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 372: Pawn’s Promotion

🕑 Added 2024-11-10 13:59:52 +0000 UTC

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Damon Fitzgerald

Chapter plot was good but definitely needs a bit of editing.

Afterdark230

Well you pulled the confused part off very well.

athass_prkr

This did cross my mind, but I wanted the chapter to mimic Cedric in a way, like the way he was confused, before realizing things in the end. Don't know if I pulled it off tbh, but I am thinking on how to rewrite it properly while keeping this in.

athass_prkr

I thought about it, to be honest, but I decided to be a bit ruthless.

Afterdark230

Interesting way to finish Him off. I am going to assume that the hall he was in was the control point for the anchor. I also assume you will have Harry discover what happened in the next chapter. As for rewriting this chapter, just add some details to add context.

Callum Runchman

Clearly he was dumbledores's weapon to break a prophecy for this school but what prophecy exactly and what will be the consequences of it. Honestly thought you might give cedric a slightly redemption by having him sacrifice himself for the others to escape in the end but I guess not

Monzter E

Well his gone... looks like dumbles messed with his subconscious, his instincts, and desire even when gravely injured. A tragedy... how greek


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