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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 395: Scorching Sun

🕑 Added 2024-12-21 14:00:05 +0000 UTC

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DoodleBopCheese

If the plot follows cannon, Neville should have the map now. I was just thinking how Harry would respond to being called Harold Smith. Also, I’m curious as to what his greatest fear is.

athass_prkr

I had something planned about it in the earlier parts of the story, somewhere in the second year I think, but I scrapped it since a lot of people thought that the cat-and-mouse chase between Harry and Riddle was taking too long and that he shouldn't be distracted about it. The plan was to have a bit of a chase to find the map, and after getting it, it would have a few clues from Lily hidden inside, which would get Harry to accidentally do something that sent a signal to Lupin, which would get him to come to Hogwarts the following year. Tbh, it wasn't a massive part of the story, and any needs I had for it, plot-wise, were pretty easily filled with other stuff. There's a lot of stuff that I ended up scrapping, like the whole thing with the Titans, which I planned on using instead of broken prophecies in the tournament. I had an alternate plotline about Harry going to the past (instead of Earth 2), but I didn't like it. There was a plotline about Arcturus' old guard that I removed since it would have made the story go in too many directions at once. To be honest, every small bit of world-building I wrote into the story had a small arc ready behind it. I think I have my old notes somewhere with most of the stuff, but there are a lot of things that I decided not to do, either because of the pacing of the story, becoming side stories at once, or because I just didn't like them.

DoodleBopCheese

I’ve been curious for a while now. Where is the Marauder’s Map? Does it not exist in this world? I was also thinking about a boggart.

Chris Cyrus

Bro…albus if you destroy Stonehenge imma be seriously pissed…Harry stop this demented old man

athass_prkr

Thanks for letting me know. It should be fixed now.

Afterdark230

I think you covered what you wanted to with Dumbles. You are showing that he is not thinking clearly and is acting rashly. This will lead either to a hell of a screwup or an explosion of epic proportions. I like how you do take the time and set the tone. Keep it up!

Afterdark230

“The ones that I recruited, the saw the Light” should be they?

Callum Runchman

Shame moody will likely die from dumbles manipulations. I always liked his character despite the relatively small role he played overall. Always seen him as a skilled powerful warrior that tried to always fight for good, regardless of how violent he may need to be, unlike most others who fight for the light


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