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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 402: Wisdom’s Path

🕑 Added 2025-01-02 14:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Anthony

Thank you

Vortex

Maybe the release of a broken prophecy (killing Tom) could help?

Afterdark230

I like the banter back and forth, it feels good and reads good. As for the lore in it, I think you started to tell it, I think if you continue the conversation with the Gilmore you will nail the lore part. If you tie in the tests with that conversation we will better understand why he put them in place. You hint at it with him saying he is disappointed but I would hammer it home. I agree with Harry it’s almost too easy. There is another shoe to drop somewhere .

Callum Runchman

Can't we just kill voldemort to remove that clear threat of greed and selfishness. I get dracul made the demand initially but now they're there woth how Solomon is disgusted by him as well as the threat surely Harry can be done with him and any risk he may pose.


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