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(EM Vol. 2: A Wandering Melody) Chapter 83: Seven Faces

🕑 Added 2025-10-09 14:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Marius Petrauskas

nice

athass_prkr

I get your point about the pacing near the end, and as much as I'd like to pretend otherwise, it wasn't by design. Honestly, I was just tired and got a headache that kept getting worse, so I just decided to wrap the chapter up and take a nap :D. As for the idea of an incarnated god, it's interesting. I've thought about it, but I don't know fit a world like Planetos, where I set up gods as eldritch beings. Still, it might be interesting to use as a contrast, like some god who used to be a mortal, so he has the mannerisms. If I decide to incorporate it, it would have to be done carefully and in a way that its nature fits and is highlighted in some way. My rambling aside, I think that it's a neat idea, and I'll see if I can do it if I figure out a way to make it fit in a meaningful way, but if I don't, then I'd rather not.

Kali Creation

Really liking your character arcs. Some are abit fast but very satisfying.

HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR

WOOH! Harry is about to put some more idiot gods in their places lmao! This is going to be great!

BaldRhaegar

The Daring is an apt name for Daeron

Sukhraj Singh

Well Daeron certainly is bold. If Alicent saw Daeron stand before The Seven Who Are One and denounce them to their face, she would have an aneurysm. If Daemon saw Daeron do that he would say Daeron just proved himself a Targaryen and might choose to marry Baela or Rhaena to Daeron. After all, Daeron would be the first Targaryen to embody the saying, Targaryens bow to neither gods or men.

Woronve

I like it! Still, it feels kinda fast, especially towards the end... Maybe it flows better if you are reading the whole arc at once... Is there any possibility of incarnated god like in danmachi or dxd in this context?

Monzter E

Hoooo bold move kid!!!


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