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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 424: The Art of Escape

🕑 Added 2025-02-11 14:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Abe 7

Blast from the past!

Garri Sarkisov

Delusions of grandeur

Afterdark230

Plus you have the whole leave and not hurt Harry in any way with Hermonie.

Chris Cyrus

Oh…she’s gonna get wholloped ain’t she lol

athass_prkr

I thought about it but Hermione does have a role in this, which I found more fitting to her 'storyline'. I know I'm being vague, but I'm doing my best not to spoil anything but it's the main reason I didn't just pick her. This should be clear in the next chapter. Thanks for your suggestion though.

athass_prkr

Thanks for letting me know. It should be fixed now.

Tamen Dutta

half the continued.” Continent??

MonolithV

I think the twist reveal would have had more impact if it was Hermione instead. She really does hate when someone has better achievements that her, as well as discrimination against muggle borns. Alexander hypeing up his mother to be this saint when she's been the villain would be more interesting. Most of the motivation for Penelope could probably be kept the same for Hermione, all that would need to be added is a good reason for her to fake her death.

Callum Runchman

Feel like Harry's just gonna send her back by force and fix whatever she's broken before casually going on a date with Daphne. Tbh they're just not advance or powerful enough to be any sort of threat or issue for him

Afterdark230

Very well done, kinda fast paced but had all the info. Till the next one.

Monzter E

Hehe... typical... welp hope harry got some clues on how to defeat grindie and his dog


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