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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 425: The Dangers of Passion

🕑 Added 2025-02-13 13:35:24 +0000 UTC

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Abe 7

Talk about curve balls

Garri Sarkisov

Wow

Jethro Frank

“And I don’t understand why you even needed to kid.” “And I don’t understand why you even needed the kid.” I didn’t see any other typos, another banger Athass! LFG, Harry! Fighting a god now? Hell yeah!

Jethro Frank

Yeah, but he’s not fighting a full god though. He’s fighting a woman channeling the power of a god, but his limitations are her body and soul. There’s no reason Harry can’t win that fight.

Chris Cyrus

I feel like Harry should maybe win…but also fighting a god should put him in the hospital or worst almost seeing deaths door. Hmmm so are the gods all just kinda dicks? That’s gonna be sad for me cause I like a lot of Norse lore and mythology

athass_prkr

Yeah, I get your point. I do struggle sometimes with just forgetting certain events or mentioning a few things. A recap is a pretty good idea. I'll try to make some when I have some free time, like make one for every 100 chapters or so. Anyway, I'll put the whole 'why earth is important' thing in the next chapter. I don't actually remember where I put it, or if I put it at all, so might as well be safe.

Callum Runchman

You might have previously but at 425 chapters alongside various other fanfics I read that are also regularly updated i might have forgotten. The odd recap on basic outline of the story and key points every now and then wouldn't hurt as its not like you quickly reread the entire story to rough up on specific details. About 350 chapters too long to do that lol 😆

athass_prkr

Did I seriously never mention that? I feel like I did. I've been writing the chapters with the assumption that this was known information. I suppose I forgot to talk about it or something. In case I missed it, I don't mind including the reason in the next chapter. Thanks for letting me know, though.

Callum Runchman

Why is it all Immortals are obsessed with manipulating and controlling earth and the humans that inhabit it? Like seriously we've seen the light and dark do so for millennia, the Olympians did so on a smaller scale woth the magical Greeks, lily and voldemort believong they were Immortal wanted to rule Britain unopposed and now the Norse pantheon who started the inevitable fall of ragnarok and final deadly war between the light and dark want to take control over them and are willing to bend the natural laws of time to their breaking point to actually achieve this. In the DC universe some stories play it as earth being the centre of the multiverse or the hidden location of the anti-life equation but here I cannot see any understandable reason for all these higher being of immense power to be so desperate to control the world

Gummyking2

I’m imagining the heimdall from the god of war video game

athass_prkr

Yeah, I know. I'm addressing that in the next chapter. When I tried to put it here, it just felt extremely crowded. Good suggestion, though. I feel like I'm getting a bit predictable :)

Monzter E

Gods... always so annoying when they do shit... good deductions on Harry's part. Good side chapter

Vortex

It feels better but about the bit u said at the end about this coming out of nowhere I’d say to fix that we would have to know what happened in the future that the gods don’t like or something like that

athass_prkr

I didn't mean it as Heimdall's idea, more like the Aesir in general with Heimdall as their agent, but I can see the confusion. I edited things a bit. Please let me know if it's clearer. Thanks for letting me know.

Vortex

U have made it seem like this is heimdall’s idea to do all this when I don’t think he can see the future so maybe rewrite a bit where he now here under orders or something


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