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(Enchanting Melodies) Chapter 469: A Glimpse Forward

🕑 Added 2025-05-11 14:00:56 +0000 UTC

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Doubledoor

cool look into the future! I like the idea of an epilogue like this, but unlike some, I hope it remains just that. I feel like it'd be better to leave Sarah as a possibility, then a certainty. Like a representation of the future the world is allowed to have, now that Harry saved it from the machinations of the Light and the Dark.

Afterdark230

Well unlike others I like the style you wrote Hermonie in. She till does not understand what happened to her was entirely her fault. Harry just helped keep her together. Is she bitter…. Yes she is, and still has not learned her lessons. As for Sarah, I like the spark. I would love to see a spin off of her being an apprentice under “Harry” ah the story lines you could go. Maybe a book two someday.


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