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(EM Vol. 2: A Wandering Melody) Chapter 24: Kind Eyes

🕑 Added 2025-06-26 14:02:20 +0000 UTC

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athass_prkr

It's a nice idea, but it's sort of a very fine line to tread. Having Harry be involved in the affairs of the Dance would be like an instant win, which is why I didn't go with that route. If Harry were less OP, then I would have had some more options, but it didn't feel right to nerf him just for this story. Instead, I'm making the challenge far more intellectual in nature, a mystery to solve, instead of an enemy to slay, with his seemingly casual actions having a lot of consequences. He's essentially involved without actually being involved. If that will stay the case, I don't know. Maybe I'll come up with a way to make him involved that would fit with what I've been doing so far, maybe not.

Sayantan Roy

I wish you would give the potters some cause to integrate... The way things are, I don't really see why Harry would be willing to do anything or how having him in the story would be any fun if he has no incentive to involve himself...

Marius Petrauskas

nice

Garri Sarkisov

Finally good human reliable relatives

BriskyMortar

I have a complaint. We need at least 2 chapters, no, 3 chapters every day. You can't just keep delivering awesome chapters and expect us to be satisfied with only one at a time. Joking aside, great chapter and the story is flowing pretty nicely. The pacing and changing of POVs are working marvelously. You clearly improved a lot since the fic before EM that I forgot the name (magical marvel I guess?)

TypistTyphon

Great chapter

Sukhraj Singh

Now this is what a healthy relationship with your parents and grandparents should look like. I agree with the Rhaenys actress, Rhaenys and Corlys probably have the healthiest relationship in the entire show, its good that they get to share that with their grandchildren. I don't fell offended that Rhaenys for not being able to love Rhaenyra's Strong children, after all it is a hard thing to ask someone to love someone who is not your blood and your actual grandchild.

Monzter E

Nice... how relatives should be...


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