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My Hero Automata 140-145

🕑 Added 2025-11-09 06:26:41 +0000 UTC
My Hero Automata 140-145

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The Foreign Traveler

How many chapters do you think you’ll need before this story can count as finished Novus? Edit 1: If “his” are newborn AI… If “these” are newborn AI… Edit 2: Even 6O hasn’t “answer”… Even 6O hasn’t “answered”… Edit 3: …together could and “could” make… …together could and “would” make… Edit 4: …take steps “too” push harder… …take steps “to” push harder… Edit 5: …she practically punched “had” her own hands… …she practically punched her own hands… Edit 6: Reinforced “concreate” walls… Reinforced “concrete” walls…

Novus Peregrine

You're not wrong :-). Character interaction and worldbuilding are generally the things I'm best at. While combat is where I'm weakest. Still, it is what it is, sadly.

Artemis

Thank you for the update, it's great to see the characters again. It's sad to have to rush things a bit since I feel like the writing of fun interpersonal dynamics is one of your strongest abilities. Then again, I'd probably read a full length story just focusing on A2 being adorably awkward around her fans.

Novus Peregrine

Glad you liked it :-). I admit, I can't stop picturing a group of fans following A2 around as she slowly starts walking faster and faster to try and escape them. Mentally thinking 'can't run, they'll know I'm prey!'

Orchamus

Damn that took me almost an hour to read! Such a good chunk of content🤤😋 Loved the A2 fanboy/fangirling that seems to be going on, adorable to think of super tsun(for an android) A2 getting adoring looks from a bunch of boys and girls in uniform😆 ...I try not to think to hard on the Aussie chappys, brrrrr 🥶


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