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Displaced Hero - Sith Girl Poll

🕑 Added 2025-05-27 23:44:01 +0000 UTC

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Novus Peregrine

Haha. I admit, I half expected her to be the most popular option because of that. Though we'll see if it holds up. The poll HAS only been up for 5 days, and less than a third of those that can vote in it have :-p.

Jamie Celtic

As yoda would say perversion strong, it is with young zavra s'hi, will of the force it is hhmmmnnn

Novus Peregrine

*shrug* On that aspect, do remember that Ood Bnar and Celeste Morne are floating around, fresh from the conflicts one step older than the one Zavra is from. Not that I'm trying to persuade you to change your vote. I like all the options equally. Which isn't exactly shocking since I wrote them :-p.

Wolf Games

While the futa aspect was nice I feel like someone older from the past would help him out more not some one close to there time line

Novus Peregrine

Whew! There's a lot here. First, I'll make the same general statement I've said to several people ;-). A lot of the point of these variants is to get a feel for what people were actually looking for out of 'Sith Girl' due to how nebulous the original concept was. I tried to make them ALL compelling, so that it becomes mostly a question of what sort of Force Powers, Personalities, and Potential Relationship Role (I.E. Kinks and Switch/Sub status) they bring to the table. Now for more specific things: The Futa thing is always a bit of complicated topic. Or, perhaps it would be better to call it 'polarizing.' A lot of people like the idea, or don't mind it at least, but just as many find it majorly off-putting. If Hexa wins outright, I'll have a good idea that a significant amount of my readers are into it (or at least don't mind). If she ends up doing really well but not winning...then I might be inclined to ask specifically about Futa style additions in another pull at some point. As you said, it could be achieved via other means. Samara. Addressing a specific worry you stated here, Samara won't be TOO messed up over the 'betrayal.' I'm not one to write angsty character much. So, while it will certainly be something she needs to deal with, it won't linger long. The Force and the ability to feel people out with it, particularly when the other person is a Force sensitive empath that actively choose to let you in, can shortcut that process a lot. Not completely avoid it, but shorten her issues there a lot. Particularly when it's her rescuers involved...and they'll have the chance to prove their sincerity by helping her through the carbon sickness. Remember how messed up Han was by it, and he wasn't in stasis anywhere near as long. Enhancement: Yes, Samara's can be applied to non-Force-sensitives. Because, as seen with all the awakened characters from Tisht, the really isn't such a thing as a non-Force-being in Star Wars. Save, perhaps, a few specific species that are Force Immune. As for cybernetic enhancement, I can't quite see Padme agreeing to it, since she's mostly an optimistic pacifist. I CAN see Sabé happily going along with it, though. Particularly as she's already undergone body-modification to look like Padmé and proven to be unbothered by it.

Novus Peregrine

That's the point ;-). Them all being awesome, that is. Not feeling like you're missing out :-). The original concept was so nebulous that I need a better idea of what sort of thing people were actually voting for, with each of these girls each representing a variant of what someone might be imagining when someone says 'Sith Girl.' Samara is, I'd say, the second kinkiest. The reason Zavra get's the first position for me is that she's fully embraced the way she was trained, and the sheer number of fun, kinky things that can be done with 'implants' is much broader than just 'character is always horny.' ;-)

Novus Peregrine

I'm glad you like some of them, at least ;-). And a lot of the point of this was to get an idea of exactly what sort of thing people were envisioning for this character :-). The concept was very nebulous, and each of them represent a different aspect of what one could think of in a 'Sith Girl' sort of character...

Keht Jelicho

While I like the fact Hexa brings a lot from the centrality (including a dreadnaught) and about the Unity, they are external aspects that you could have any other background character bring if you want to have the League get that knowledge. The Futa possibility aspect is some what interesting, though the cybernetic knowledge of Zavra seems like it could also provide an avenue to explore that, and could possibly lead to multiple people being able to experience it, especially if she works together with Mei and comes up with some different temporary possibilities, or even some kind of nanite cybernetic "grow as desired/needed" option. Really its the "actively looking for a harem/polycule" that seems most interesting. I do like how both Zavra and Xel'ka are definitely followers, they would make for new dynamics to explore as none of the other members of the harem are truly that submissive/looking to serve (outside of the bedroom). Zavra's cybernetic and technical knowledge and Xel'ka/her Ancestor's knowledge of how to use typically Dark side abilities without using the dark side itself could both be boons to learn as well. Samara's ability to give Permanent enhancements, and the fact that she's actually a blaster-focused precognitive combatants are what sell her to me. Yes there is the issue of the overabundance of lust energy and the "recent" betrayal that could make her a bit jaded and abrasive/demanding/high maintenance for any kind of immediate future upon introduction, which I am not too thrilled about character-wise, but it also would give room for a lot of character development and growth and make her more likely to be a much more "worth it to put up with" character who acknowledges how much hassle they cause and is grateful for Izuku/others for helping her despite it. It's a trade off. But the permanent enhancements and my desire for more blaster focused combatants (I know Padme, and likely Sabe, are too, but they're not [yet?] Force sensitive), particularly if she ends up getting short, underbarrel, saber-bayonets on her blaster pistols (similar to some of the melee mod pistols of Borderlands, but lightsabers) for close-up/defense? That just sounds cool. I really don't know much about Dream Walking, but it certainly sounds like it could have potential to be a game-changer too, but the rituals to give permanent enhancements? If they can even be given to non-force sensitives then that could mean that Padme/Sabe (and her other handmaidens if we're being honest, even if not a part of the harem) could get a big boost to help them better protect themselves. With how often Padme is targeted in canon, and in becoming involved with Izuku it is only likely to happen even more, they all really could use the help/enhancements. For me its got to be Samara. That said, I really REALLY like all the characters, you have done an absolutely fantastic job on them Novus. They each definitely bring something to the table and I would eagerly like to see how pretty much all those various possibilities would add to the story. I went to Hexa first but after a time decided that others could bring similar benefits to the relationship, or a different (or still her/a version of her, just not romantically involved with izuku) character could bring the knowledge of the centrality/Unity if you want to include/give those to the league. Zavra and Xel'ka both bring interesting new possibilities to the table, but the biggest thing for the relationship is both seeking a Master. Zavra being a trained agent/pet that has lost her master, and could be sent out to do various missions, Xel'ka being mostly untrained and could possibly become a "padawan" to Aayla and/or Izuku while also bringing the Holocron and possibly the spirit/Ghost of her ancestor too. Samara though brings the possibility of actual tangible benefit to the whole harems capabilities and thus their safety and ability to face threats, this even before the strategic benefits she may provide on a wider basis, and the fact that Mei's portal belt stuff could prove to be helpful to Samara for more kinky side of things. Yeah, based on current poll results (and I know its early, the first day) so far I don't expect Samara to actually pull ahead. But they're all interesting in their own rights so I won't be too upset. Plus the current leader, Hexa, might let Padme and Sabe become force sensitive sooner (I say sooner because after what happened during the confrontation with the dark side hutt I truly can see Padme and Sabe, as Harem members, eventually ending up close enough to something similar and awakening to the force anyways). Or Zavra might have cybernetic ways to enhance them/the other members (combine cybernetics with droids to make a cybernetic interface to a [deployable/portable?] droid-based cybernetic exoskeleton or bodyguard/"protocol" droid that can turn into a set of power armor?) Whether directly or not. Or Xel'ka could end up having a knack for politics/learn from Padme and others how to be a diplomat and end up taking the knowledge of how to use dark side abilities without the darkside and actually "stealing" away Dooku/converting him into an ally (that's a stretch, but she has the less developed set of advantages, but that also means she has the broadest range of possibilities she could grow into). They're all good, and bring stuff to the table in their own ways. I look forward to seeing who wins and eventually will get introduced, as well as if any aspects of non-chosen characters may still show up in the story.

WhatAFungi

Ughhhh your killing me here!!! All of these are awesome character ideas!!! I feel like no matter who is picked I’m going to miss out. But I guess I can’t really “lose” this vote either, by that same logic. I gotta vote for Samara though. I’m a sucker for Marrin from the Fallen Order games. So I’m a huge fan of the sorcery aspects. I also think the eternally horny girl is way more Kinky than a simple “super-sub”. Samara would totally tweak Izuku’s hero-ness, giving her way more of an in to the harem than simply being a sub. VOTE SAMARA!!!

Dominique Brassel

I must say that I am highly conflicted as I like the first and last choices almost equally especially what they bring to the table with the first choice we have a highly trained fighter that in her tech speciality could bring incredible advancement to both survivability and strength of both Jedi and normal troops and her sith meditation spehre could bring incredible interesting developments for ship building and other technologys as it is probably tech similar to the star forge seeds there already have it could let them figure out how those work easyer and equip ships with stripped down versions for better logistics....... And of course she is the most kinki of the lot...... Then we have the last choice is a natural infiltrater but what is the most interesting is the "secret knowledge" which could bring a sharp increase in force users even slightly trained and weak most force users make excellent pilots or mobile suit users.... So an army full of trained force sensitives is a big advantage but with the dark side being an actual corrupting force in this story it could also be a big liability so for me the first choice wins .....I also like the out of time angle more ..... Now talking about choices two and three ..... I find what they bring more lackluster while the enhancement rituals of number three is interesting it doesn't bring as much to the table as the other choices as it could only enhance so many people and it's likely that who could do it on who is extremely limited it could probably be used to enhance the troops as well as the Jedi but it's still a force rituals that needs a force user to per perform and the tantric energy overload will probably be extremely tedious the deal with ....on a positive node this could help enhance isuku to be on sidiuos or plagus level of power or even to starkiller level.....but one "man" with such power can not win a war alone .... Now option two the holocron itself seems like it could actually help all the Jedi currently on Izukus side but only him and the Jedi also she is half trained and distrusts the Jedi which could be a serious problem with the rest of the harem/polycule so probably not a good idea

Novus Peregrine

If it makes you feel any better, I'm considering pairing Asora with Eirtaé, though they won't get involved with the main pairing. Poor Asora deserves some love, and I accidentally made Eirtaé an adorkable nerd-girl in the last update. I liked it enough as a personality matrix for her to grow into that I left it when it sort of just...happened. Aside from Sabé I hadn't really fleshed the Handmaidens out much.

Novus Peregrine

Yeah, there's a reason I'm running this poll in the first place. The original concept was so nebulous that I'm not quite sure exactly what people were voting FOR. Hence the variants all having different personalities and specializations. As for who I expected to win? I honestly didn't have a freaking clue. I figured Zavra would have an edge from the hentai/pervert faction, but I legit don't know how big of a draw that is for Displaced Hero. The nature of Aayla's original situation means it's probably the 'kinkiest' of my currently ongoing works. But I don't know what percentage of readers were specifically drawn in by that. In a lot of ways, this doubles as a litmus test for the interests of my patrons in general.

Novus Peregrine

Yeah, I made sure to include at least one that is a straight up ritualist, though both Hexa and Zavra might have at least some level of familiarity with them, and there might be some include in Xel'ka's holocron. Samara is 100% the actual specialist though.

The Foreign Traveler

But…but… *Reaches hand out feebly* Hot bunny girl secretary! … Oh well, the people have spoken! I have to admit, these are some badass Sith Girl characters you’ve given us Novus! Hexa has my vote! If Samara had more though, I definitely would have gone for her!

Novus Peregrine

Well, bad for your ability to make a choice, maybe ;-). But I DID make them all as compelling as possible, you know. I intended them to all be sufficiently interesting, so that many or most peoples choices will likely come down mostly to the differences in Force Powersets, Personalities and Potential Relationship Role (I.E. Kinks and Switch/Sub status). I'm honestly glad you found most of them compelling on their own :-). Edit: Oh, and yeah, Zavra and Xel'Ka are the most Sith like, if you're talking the Sith Force Group. But that's not the same thing as the Sith Species.

Delphinous

reading through these, the histories of all of them are great, but the personalities of some of them were strong turn offs for how they'd fit int he story. then i got to hexa haeraran who does have the least bombastic backstory, but the most agreeable personality, and i was already convinced. then i saw you compared her personality to matured starfire and i was fully engaged, as starfire is probably in my top 5 favorite fictional females of all time. it will be interesting to see how this poll ends up going, and i'm also curious which lady you expected to win before the voting started

Danielle

Well, I would like to see an actual ritualist in the story so… Plus cultural melting seems the most fun honestly, even if I’d pick the actual apprentice otherwise

Daemonioros

Is it a bad thing that I kind of want 3 out of 4 of these introduced. Especially the first and last options seem rather interesting. Zavra might be trained partially in the light side but shes the only one that actually full out feels like a sith to me. A sith Meditation sphere would be an interesting ship to study as well. And yeah with an actual sith in the harem I kind of want the actual dark side being a thing. And well I've always been a fan of starfire. So a similar personality is always fun so Hexa sounds great as well. Though I do feel as though Sabe could already partially fill that role so it wouldn't be essential. It's mostly the shape shifting that pulls me to this option. As well as a backstory I rather like.


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