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What would everyone like to see from me?

🕑 Added 2021-07-29 21:30:47 +0000 UTC

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Lain

More slow stuff, may seem boring to some but I really enjoy the gradual changes like in the teen titans or the weregirl story

Charoset

True but I have obligations to catch up on.

Charoset

Good news is you'll get a nice amount of those over the next few weeks with some of the rewards.

Anonymouschanman

More OC stuff like the weregirl story you did? :D

PermierAuthurcrat

As I said before it you be nice for you to spend more time writing stories that you come up with yourself, see what ideas you can come up with.

Charoset

Fair enough, though I do a majority anime/drawing based ones.

ZBL

I personally feel icky about Real Life Person TF stories.

Semroth

Yeah I mean as I said I dont mind whether you do them or not its just a popular property in the anime/manga sphere right now. Just for me, getting a little sick of them

Charoset

True though both of those options add to word counts obviously. For yours I usually go over cause I know you enjoy those elements so while I can't do it often due to word bloat(if every 3k story became a 4k one I'd never get my backlog done lol) I'll definitely keep it in mind for all of yours.

Charoset

It just won polls so it has stories. Can't really change what wins polls.

MightFenek

Also, I'm grabbing one of those commission slots as soon as they are avaibale. I got a bunch of ideas already on hand...

MightFenek

Well, we know each other and our tastes already pretty well lol You have a really good range with the kind of stories you can write. In my opinion writers usually focus more in either the mind or the body shifting depending of their taste, you managed to find a good balance between both. The physical part of the transformation usually comes in second in my enjoyement of the fetish, the struggle of the mind and changes of behavior tend to be the sexiest part to me, but you write some really enjoyable transformation descriptions, they are raw, visceral and sexy - I know you love to write those, so when I work with a collab or commission with you I like to plan the idea around your tastes. As far as these kind of change go, you write them in the best way in my opinion. I guess one thing that I would like to see more is *character interaction* during or after the transformations. Ususally the stories happen in a short time frame and end not long after the character is fully transformed (with the climax being the end of the transformation), but watching how the new girl acts and interacts with people can be quite fun. For example, I still think one of the hottest things you wrote was the Draco and Harry interaction at the start of Snape and the Sinister Sweets. Another option is ending the physical transformation *before* the mental transformation. Have a character be fully transformed but still try to resist and keep his mind on his daily life. A very enjoyable part is seeing the character struggle with impulses and mind changes that make him behave in different ways than he usualy would and interact with people in different ways. These tend to be more complicated, usually writers write longer stories to acomodate both physical /mental changes along with character interaction or...just rush the physical part to focus on the mental/character interaction side of things. I know its usually not the easiest kind to do, and neither the most popular, the climax being the moment the dick slurps away seems to be the one people like the most.

Semroth

I'm enjoying what your putting out right now but I would want to see less MHA stuff because it seems that has loads of stories but if you want to continue with that I wouldn't mind