IGOTH (Goth IHOP TG)

Eryn Thompson

SPOILERS(Obvi) This was such a fun read! I loved the meme back when it was current and still do. At the time, people made their own stories and audios of it- and your story just blew through all my expectations and tantalized into reaching a state of euphoria ^^ At first I was kinda confused by them splitting up, and also certain details about their appearance being omitted. Usually, writers will describe them in great detail but I honestly think this is a better way. All I needed to know what his name and his sex to get an idea. Once it was time to visualize his body, then I was very attentive to the physical changes occuring. (That is unless his physique was described in the beginning and I simply forgot with my low attention span >_<) I love how innocuous it all seemed, and normal without a hint of supernaturality at first(aside from springing up over night, I mean) and your writing just really pulls me in and gets me excited about the possibilities of imagination. I'll be reading a long, I see words and phrases used in ways Ive never seen them described before, that are somehow very fitting to the situation. And your description of clothing/outfit forming on the body was like a literal "wake up!" moment. It's astonishing to me. I feel like your power over words and the imagination would create a scenario of a real "hold my beer." event. From a simple idea of Goth IHOP you crafted such mastery over language, mixing in aspects of different kinds of goth, a very essence of the visceral broodiness and gore, and juxtaposed alongside the hospitality of a wait staff. I especially love how Layla treated the whole "chore" of getting Mary ready. The story itself left little mysteries for my own head to explore. I think it's assumed that Layla was also once a guy, but not sure, and the very concept of being a victim in a chain is something very Halloween-y to me, and it was executed just beautifully here. I also love the consequential nature of "dealing with an asshole" deep down it kinda sates that feeling that many of us have wanting those people to "get their just desserts" i dont fully understand that phrase even, but i know how its utilized. It made me both really happy to see a positive ending, and really horny to imagine them hooking-up at the end. Something just so deliciously taboo about their preferences being flipped and their lives being overwritten and yet their both still here. The appeal of identity death. Someone definitely died, and despite that- they're still here. It gets personal to me, cause honestly I feel a bit like Ive lived through my own identity death. Its hard to say. Anyway, I wasnt sure how Jackyln would return based on the beginning, I think the format chosen for this story was ideal for a nice fap session, stimulating the mind amongst other things. It really does make me extra curious about what sort of TG was going on at Femboy Hooters, though.. I loved reading your story. A dumb/funny meme taken to a new height through your mastery over words, your playful and rich imagination, and capitalizing on the common theme of physical mutilation/brutality within the existing themes to produce something truly unique, fun, and very hot. Thank you for sharing!! (Sadly, ill be missing out on many of your stories cause im unfamiliar with the characters. My loss) ;3;