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🕑 Added 2018-09-08 01:25:30 +0000 UTC

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N647

thanks for pointing this out, and ues usually I have a frind from UK help me with the text and editing the dialogue, he had some issues so was unable ot help me this time this why this page has been such a mess in this regard, got into contact with him and will give the page a final pass now. As for my typos, sadly it goes beyond the lenguage barrier, I seem to have dislexy, so many times I simple do not see the typos, I m able to function properly, so usually is not a huge problem, but even writhing this took like 10 minutes for me, and situations like stress or exhaustion can really hamper my typing, I hope I have made no mistakes here

Autoreloader

I saw you updated the text. I guess it makes a little more sense now, but I have something to say about your captions. I know that English isn't your native language, but it would really help if you had someone that could help you edit your spelling errors and lack of punctuation. I'm bringing this up because this page added a new spelling error and left a previous error without correction. I've been a patron of yours since the month you started the comic, and I haven't let it bother me too much, but after 2 and a half years of it I sort of wish you had an editor. It would greatly improve the comic as a whole if the reader can easily read the text presented.

Blur128

In response: I’m not complaining that’s Megs boobs look bigger 😜. I like it.

N647

well this a line I mstill working on considering changing level for GEAR, or big girl, indicating how mimi is bigger than megan :3

N647

hmm maybe a bit bit think os preety much consistent iwht previus pages, there may be a slight variation as I was having a bit of problem with the pose

Chasbanner

Double boing! :D

Autoreloader

The text in this page is strange here. Mind if I suggest something? After Megan says “and you’re okay with that?” Rose says “I’m allowing it. I thought adding home brew spells would keep the game fun!” The thing about being at proper level didn’t sound right to me. The next thing Rose would say could be “Oh! Ranger, (Megan’s player character) perhaps you’d like a blessing as well? At third level it gives you a stat boost!”