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Chapter 318 - Truths and Lies (IV)

🕑 Added 2025-11-21 22:02:42 +0000 UTC

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SegeantJoe

I had two months worth of backlog and now I caught up :(

NameGame

Good fight, that was fun. Glad that Lu was able to restrain her, that would have put a bit of a target on them. Not that the rest of the disciples won't, hah. That golden aura though, what was that!? Just her perception, or was that some ability of Lu's? I'm glad you decided not to have Light be the villain, even though she has a definite streak of "there's something not right with that girl" about her. I liked the chapter where she walked through the mountain town on her own. It's like she's a member of the Addam's Family, kinda, except with less black clothing? At least that's how I see her, I guess. The time in Silvercrest was well done, I never would have guessed that it was expanded from a stopgap to a significant part of the story, it felt well planned out. Glad you picked up Lao Shun, I think he brings a useful level of experience and modern knowledge to the group. Long Tao knows a lot, but a nothing about current events or significant people/groups since he was so far beyond everything here for so long. The oldest disciple (ignoring long tao's rebirth) who is having to come to terms with actually being a disciple and not an independant power of his own. Sounded like he's starting to get it after being given the healing art! The strongest shaman...is the one who stays home drawing year after year after year. It's like trying to attack a library where every page of every book is a nuke or defense or ward or something like that. I kinda like 'em, they're pretty unique to your story. Thanks for the chapter!


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