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🕑 Added 2025-09-28 19:25:40 +0000 UTC

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TheFanficGOD

Thank you!

Andres919

The story is amazing, I appreciate the additional context and world building added to the original. The history classes are my favorite chapters. Negative feedback is the "coincidental" nature of some solutions/knowledge (i.e the horucrux and dragon) and the outright dislike/hatred for Malfoy. In Malfoy's case and future villains, it would be nice to see more depth to their characters and not simple evilness for evilness sake. It would also be nice to see side stories or chapters beyond the OG main cast. Overall, I think the story is awesome and look forward to the daily chapters.

TheFanficGOD

Thanks a bunch!

One Winged Angel

Feedback: So far you have set the series up fairly well with plenty of moments in the series that not only change the canon but do it for "the better" while keeping the storyline relatively the same. Though its way too soon for the canon to go out the window, its getting to that point and thats where i see alot of fanfics go their own route into uncharted waters. So far the major changes are Lucius' fall from grace and the change to harrys home life. Which both are major in terms of the big overarching plot since Lucius having a hold over Fudge was the main reason Voldemort had so much time after his rebirth to set up his cult again. And Harry having a nonabusive home will change book 3 since he basically ran away at that point till book 5 i believe(been a bit since i read the books). I will say that the positives are that i freaking love this series with a fire and am happily paying 18 bucks a month toread this everyday. The only real negatives i can see are the setup of Voldemort becoming the butt of the joke, which while funny now, could lead to a lackluster conflict when he rises again, im hoping that stakes do rise because as it stands its a very good slice of life series that seems to be heading to war since book 4 is when shit hits the fan. I hope you continue the series but For feedback all i ask is that when threats rise, they arent always a "Great this guy again" moment since alot of the Dark Wizards that rose in the books are straight mass murderers and psychopaths. I APPRECIATE YOUR WORK!

TheFanficGOD

Thanks! I will post the list soon!

TheFanficGOD

Thanks a lot! Really appreciate the feedback!

TheFanficGOD

Yus! He always assumes there has to be something to gain, but he is not to blame. Even Cassian said same to Harry.

TheFanficGOD

Thanks! That will come into play very soon. And we will see its effects more in play.

TheFanficGOD

Thank you! Appreciate it really. In the hindsight, I can see I overlooked some of the nuances, as the year was getting dragged. I will take that into consideration in the third year!

TheFanficGOD

Thanks! Wasn't sure if I was successful in showing that!

TheFanficGOD

Right, das coming soon

Andres919

This is a very good point … I think even in the 90s a teacher could get a bit physical with students still?

TheLostGolem

I did give feedback. I said that it would be funny if you made basilisks be historically from Australia.

JamPoe81

Also, I love how you done with Year 2. I thought the culprit was Cassian’s cousin or Neville but the actual culprit was a really good twist and made sense.

Maniac000

Dumbledore comes not just from a previous era but he comes from the era before the previous era when children could show up to school with a black eye and teachers didn’t ask questions while Cassian comes from a generation that is supposed to report any hint of child abuse at home. Speaking of Hagrid, I actually have my own theory that after Dumbledore defeated Grindelwald he used the Elder wand to repair his wand. We saw it can repair broken wands in canon. But since he’s not supposed to have one he keeps it in his umbrella hence why he’s able to use it to cast that fire charm when he first meets Harry.

Docnox

Didn’t see the feedback request before. So, 2nd year. I feel it odd Cass wasn’t considerably more proactive once he learned Harry could hear it in the walls. The Rowena thing was very out of left field and i assume that will be cleared up quite soon. Snape has been getting the cartoon villain treatment far too much. He far has more depth then he’s been given credit in this story, hell he has a sense of humor. Cass comes across extremely biased against Slytherin students. At the end of first year he had a big finale speech about recognizing more students’ work. There was Zero growth shown. It wasn’t touched on at all for the entire second year. Frankly there could be a bit less banter and several more lines with his peers. A teacher MC is an interesting/rare perspective and it’s been very underutilized. That said. His interactions with the board were great. His lessons were interesting. (Yet often to disconnected from the plot)

Dlaws11

Yeah, sometimes I get lost with the system and how it is affecting Cassian. It almost feels like the ancient magic is overshadowing what he is gaining from the original system. I would like the system to be brought back into the fold a little more.

JamPoe81

Is it that hard for Dumbledore to understand that Cassian wanted to help Harry, not because he was friends with his parents, or that he’s famous, but because Harry was abused and needs help. Hell, Cassian would have still done it if Harry was a normal student.

Evitox

I usually never comment but I did have some feedback in mind. I really liked diverging from the main plot of Harry Potter with all of Cassians changes and it was a really satisfying progression. A teacher in Hogwarts actually going beyond what they are required to do to help students is super refreshing to see. All of the moments of seeing him help and inspire students were my favorites along with helping Hagrid, and going against the ministry. My all around favorite part was Cassian using Lumos Noctus as I’ve been anticipating it being used since the it was introduced. Only thing I’d want to see otherwise is more classroom scenes and even though some dislike it (I remember that being mentioned a while back but not 100% sure if that’s right or the sentiments changed) they are so cool to me. It goes back to inspiring the students, causing positive change and also just having a good teacher. Only other comment is to see more dueling from Cassian or just add a new structure to it so students can learn to fight. I’ve imagined scenes of a colosseum type idea(doesn’t have to be that) where there are unique constructed environments and elements that challenge students to adapt. It’s been a lot of theory in adapting magic and the dueling is a start but throwing students into a more active and changing environment with magical elements and safety mechanisms would be awesome. Overall awesome job and I’m always refreshing Patreon to catch the latest chapters. Keep it up! Edit: one thing that I just thought of that would be good is seeing the teaching staff start to change in their mentalities too. Of course story wise it makes sense for it to happen more over time since they are used to their ways but it would be a cool addition. Also hagrid getting a wand would be awesome, giant wizard magic maybe?

Swampfox

TFTC! Also so now that book 2 is done. I feel like it was good to see the building romance and that it is not taking over the story. I am enjoying how Cassian is changing the plot but he hasn’t been able to completely derail the story. I enjoy a lot of the dialogue and the wordplay but I would like to see Cassian use more magic and also maybe a list of spells or glossary chapter would be nice.


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