sok06
patreon
total humiliation (prologue)
🕑 Added 2021-02-03 16:25:27 +0000 UTCSo, this was a picture story i did a long time ago on my DA, and a user commissioned me to expand it. If you don't mind a big spoiler, you'll find a small story attached to a picture with the same name on my DA page.
[Prologue]
"...So you see, madam, it is quite big" Gloria smiled to the couple. They really seemed interested in buying the house, and if she managed to close the deal, that would be her third big sale that week. Her bonus started to look interesting. Not that she actually needed the money, since she was ready to marry Mark in three months, but in the meantime, it was good to have something for herself. The woman turned to her husband, her eyes seemed to say "This is the right house" And apparently, he didn't disagree. The only sour note was the daughter. She seemed like she was bored with the tour, and didn't look that impressed with the house. Gloria knew that if she could do a good impression on her as well, the house would be practically sold. "So, what do you think?" She asked, in her most condescending tone. "Meh, we've seen better these days. This one is quite boring." Came the unnerving response. "Seen something that impressed you?" Gloria was ready to unleash her secret weapon. One of the smaller bedrooms had a great walk in closet, and she knew that any girl in the world would have killed for one. "Yeah. That ring". The brat wasn't playing along, but Gloria was determined in getting on her good side. "Oh this?" She displayed it with all her pride. It was actually an impressive piece of jewelry, and to this day she had no idea on the kind of money Mark had spent on it. "You know" she added in a condescending tone "If you find that right boy in your life, try to keep him for good!". The girl looked angry "Stop talking to me that way! How old do you think I am?" Gloria wasn't sure of what she had done wrong, and she didn't find a good answer in time. "I'm 19!" In her defense, she did look much younger "And besides" the girl added "I'm not into boys". So that was it. She had touched a sensitive subject. The parents seemed embarassed, and Gloria desperately tried to get the upper hand again. "Well, nothing wrong with that" She lied. She was very conservative, and despised any form of what she considered depravity "And anyway you're still too young for this." She said, showing the ring with pride. She hoped she could distract her by moving the conversation on the less sensitive matter of age difference. It didn't work. The girl looked as angry as before, and her father spoke to ease the atmosphere. "Well, I think we've seen it all. We have your number, and we'll definitely contact you in the next few days." Gloria smiled, and tried her all in. "Perfect. Oh, and while you guys wait in the car, I have something to show to... Remind me your name darling?" The girl turned her head towards her and said "Hillary" - "To Hillary, and I'm sure she's going to love it!". The parents agreed and said goodbye, while the young woman huffed and followed her through the house.
"I'm pretty sure you're going to love this, darling" She apparently couldn't stop treating her like a child, and she cursed herself as soon as her words left her mouth. "You know what i would love?" Hillary spoke in a tone that was much different than two minutes earlier. Gloria was actually curious, so she stopped to listen. "If you wouldn't talk to me like a baby." Gloria had to stop herself from laughing. The girl was trying to be convincing, but her power move wasn't ridiculous only because she seemed so young, but also for how short she was compared to Gloria. She judjed that even without her high heels off, she would be at least four inches taller than her. "Sure, don't worr-" She tried to reassure her, but she was interrupted. "I'm not worried." She added, looking weirdly calm. "You'll learn to treat me with the respect i deserve in the next few hours". "Few hours, as if" Thought Gloria. Sell or not sell, with the help of light traffic she would be at home in twenty minutes, and she would definitely get a bath. She couldn't help but notice that Hillary had her hand inside her bag, and even if she said nothing, she couldn't shake off a terrible feeling. The unnerving smile on the brat in front of her didn't help, either. "Sure darling. Now let's get you to mom and dad". She put her arm on the girl's shoulder. She had even stopped thinking about the sale, now she just wanted to leave. Hillary stood on the spot. She didn't catch the hint, and refused to move along with Gloria's arm. "You can start by calling me princess". She said, and while Gloria was still processing her words, she felt a prick in her arm, like she had just been punctured with a needle. "Shit" She said, removing her arm in a hurry. She examined her forearm, and saw it was bleeding lightly. To her horror, she saw a strange object that she couldn't identify in Hillary's hands. "What the fuck!" It had been too quick to be a syringe of any sort, but there was no denying that the girl had punctured her with something. "Shhhh, shhh, it'll be over soon". Hillary said, but instead of reassuring her, those words only seemed to feed her anxiety.
[continue...]
Comments
sok06
sent you a private message
Pfox
Can you link the original post please?
