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What do you think about the dialogues of my pieces?

🕑 Added 2019-07-06 17:50:09 +0000 UTC

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DonVirus

Thanks for your comment. I will add humiliating ones :)

valoon

I like them, would be nice if there were more humilating ones

DonVirus

Thank you! I'm glad that you like them :)

daKatzman92

I agree. They are, for the most part, great at getting the points across. However, a little tweaking here and there grammatically would make them 11 out of 10.

ZGMF-X42S

For the most part, I share WiredRM's sentiments. That said, I would suggest maybe working on things like grammar. It's nowhere NEAR bad enough detract from the pictures, but I figured that there's nothing wrong with improvement, though.

WiredRM

I am frequently impressed with your captions. :)


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