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A new month, new goals

🕑 Added 2023-03-03 16:11:39 +0000 UTC

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Trunk Monkey

File that under "Things Emily would never tolerate" :) Besides, Emily still locks the door at 5 PM... meaning that Aidalin couldn't even get into the house.

Herugrim

I wanted to re-write the notes I made in regards to the Katherin/Tia scenes as they stand currently. I wrote these before, but it was before your vacation so, figured it wouldn't hurt to repeat. Extra) Also, I have a something I call a "Saint" route without any corruption and with the "lawful good" decisions made throughout the game and I noticed something funny after concluding the Calan's Rest. In this save, the MC has never made cumwine or anything because playing the "Saint" route. But now when having dinner with Tia/Katherin there is an option to offer them cumwine - even when the MC doesn't own any cumwine in inventory. I'm guessing it's creating some problems because in this route any kind of interaction with Katherin and Tia together is locked out because when the MC is not corrupt and they are not corrupt - they seemingly would never ever consider a threesome. But this means you cannot offer them normal wine at all, only cumwine. I was interested in what would happen if offering normal wine to a non-corrupted Tia at dinner with her mom, haha. 1) After having had sex with Katherin and Tia after dinner and you go for another round with Katherin, she suddenly has her clothes back on and does say the line about getting the MC undressed, even though he is still naked. She should also still be naked, so can take out this line, fix the sprites and/or add something else more fitting. Depending on which route you wish Katherin to go, she could suggest getting Tia more drunk so she can have more alone time with you. Can be as subtle as "She's so drunk right now, you can probably sleep in my bed and she won't notice". It doesn't need to be related to a scene, simply a more intimate approach with Katherin. 2) Every sex scene with Katherin in her bed still starts with Katherin's thoughts that are about Tia and saying how she is a bad mother and needs Tia's forgiveness. I think after you'd had sex with both of them a certain amount of times, that would no longer be something that's on her mind. 3) Katherin's dialogue during sex still reflects how the MC must compensate Tia because of them doing this, but similar to (2) I think this would no longer be a topic of discussion when their threeway relation is out in the open. She could have lines about either wanting to wake up Tia (if you didn't have dinner before) or wishing you'd send Tia to Rumah so you can have more fun and sleep in the same bed. She could push you to wake up Tia to "compensate" her daughter so she feels less bad - that way instead of Tia waking you up, the scene plays out the other way around. 4) When you meet Katherin in the morning while she is collecting herbs, Tia now acknowledges the relationship and leaves because she doesn't want to watch you be intimate with her mom. She asks you to not come inside her. First is that after you've had sex with them, both Katherin and Lyvia bring up things that don't make sense anymore at this point. Katherin says you don't want to let Tia wait too long, she'll get suspicious. She obviously won't, since she knows MC is having sex with her mom. And Lyvia brings up that Tia isn't stupid and she'll figure it out. 5) Secondly, on this same scene/encounter with Katherin and Lyvia. Lyvia plays with Katherin's ass and the MC himself brings up that Lyvia is a "virgin" herself when it comes to this. But depending on where you are with Lyvia and the camp, this is no longer true of course. Perhaps this is an opening towards a future development or bonus scene where Lyvia in fact brings up that she does anal now and wouldn't mind teaching Katherin? Then once the bonus scene hits where Lyvia visits Katherin and MC at night, she follows up on this idea and it goes into this direction? I'm refraining from changing lines/ suggesting lines myself as much as possible, since it is first and foremost your game. But, if you wished I wouldn't mind putting some time and effort into rewriting certain things. Or typo hunting.

Herugrim

Welcome back! Hope you had a wonderful vacation/break!

Flamedemon

Can you add aidalin visits mira at night for bonus scene on pre-vote?


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