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Demesne 35 - Winter Plans

🕑 Added 2021-04-22 17:00:04 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Wow, looks like the Wait for Lunch scene will span 10 chapters.

william wallace

As I said it’s well written. The dialogue is good. Just feels to me as if it should have been condensed into 3 paragraphs out of a longer chapters. “Down” chapters are good as character development is really important and different from plot but this felt more like a scene that went nowhere. Just my opinion and there is no reason to value it above the author’s.


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