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Demesne 47 - Finally Back At The Dungeon

🕑 Added 2021-05-20 17:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Chaos' Crowl Kanigami

"and you've finally finishing" finished "those with no other useful skill, had garnered some sort of minor punishment from their parents," who had garnered also "The latrines had been altered so that people could manually empty them, and people, usually those with no other useful skill, had garnered some sort of minor punishment from their parents, or just people who didn't have anything else to do and had to make themselves useful. ": the end of the phrase is missing ",and people" ... what? I guess they take care of the latrine but that's missing "so that the water in the pools would be gradually replaced to keep them become breeding grounds for disease" to keep them from becoming "Lori's Demsne, Lorian" is slightly too repetitive x) saying "her Demesne" would be enough to convey the idea, no? "but was clear her strategy of" it was clear "next to the kirchen area" kitchen "that thy tried" they

SCM2814

Her demesne doesn't go that far down. Her area of influence is a sphere. Also, pure gold at the core... isn't that from Tiny Toons?

Mr. Bigglesworth

Drill straight down to the mantle of the planet, there's pure gold there at the core, pull it up and you have an infinite gold supply for trade. Bind some firewisps to cycle heat so heat can be cycled off while you do this providing heating, bonus points if you cycle it into steam with waterwisps to create steam power. Rian isn't really helping much unless the chapter where he was an Isekai was a joke.


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