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Demesne 218 - A Clear Hazard

🕑 Added 2022-08-07 16:01:02 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

Thanks for the chapter and the hard work 

SCM2814

Thanks for pointing them out, corrected.

Justin Case

>So simply-seeming, yet she knew if she tried doing it, all she'd end up with *as* a waste of good copper… simple-seeming was >The only potential sign of discomfort he showed *as* washing his hand on the snow every so often. was >Lori carefully anchored the *winding* to the stone binding >Lori imbued until the binding was contained to form at least a low-denomination bead. Skipped or replaced words wholesale here. There was an unusual amount of typos/errors in this one, usually I don't even notice any. Overall good to discover how denominations are marked. I'm really unclear on how her bowl design worked though. I thought she had a copper ingot attached at the bottom of a bowl shaped bit of wood, so that when a bead reached a certain size it would push itself up out of contact with the metal. But it seemed like instead she had a full metal bowl? I loved the byplay between Rian, Riz, and her friend. Though I am still doubtful that Riz has had sex with Rian.


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