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Demesne 233 - The Winter Community Meeting

🕑 Added 2022-09-11 16:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Anton Shomshor

I think some POV chapters from a random woodcutter or stonemason are in order. World building on just a demesne scale.

Justin Case

Lori going to the meeting just to deny Rian his voting fetish is funny. Why must she deny him? People trying to convince Umu, Mikon, and Riz to influence Rian and by extension Lori is quite interesting. I've noted before how they're effectively the secretaries of the government in a way, but even without that they have influence. I'm not surprised that people recognize that. I often wish we heard more about what's actually going on in the demense rather than Lori-vision. Rian getting everyone to bow to Lori was good, she might have been annoyed otherwise. Instead he triggered some vaguely tsundere response. I'm mixed on Rian telling people not to bother the three girls. I suppose they didn't like it. But claiming they don't work for Lori or Rian in any capacity really isn't true with how many tasks they're given. Denying something that's obviously the case is kind of pointless. Umu isn't up for the social part of the role, but Mikon and Riz can manage as subordinates. Rian's response about Umu or Mikon punching people was rather good. It's one Lori could actually accept. Amokat I'm guessing is Mikon's sister, or maybe mother. I didn't even remember she had one. The ropeweed making good fabric is quite convenient for them. I've been assuming it's basically flax. It's good that they're planning to raise production though as the clothes they brought with them likely will need to be uniformly replaced soon enough.


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